Saying "it's destiny" is not an explanation. It's bad writing, on the level of mind control. It takes away any character agency because it turns their every action into something that was destined/supposed to happen. It's forcing the plot, nothing more. I'm out.
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Fantasy · Dyrem
Taking a break, I guess. This whole thing feels like filler, because after this whole mess is through (sometime next year I guess) and the MC returns, there's a big, fat "Meanwhile..." waiting where we're gonna have to suffer through months of chapters about how supermegaawesome the MC was on the xianxia/wuxia side of the story during all this.
ch 245 242 Downfall
Sci-fi · Gravedagger
Is there any chance the MC will return before the end of 2020? If not, please let me know so that I can stop reading, since I don't care much for fillers.
ch 234 232.1 A certain Lalafell pt.2
Sci-fi · Gravedagger
The current chapter (226) showed great improvement, to the point that I didn't need to re-read anything several times to understand it, like I had to in previous chapters. There was an easily noticeable improvement in grammar, though admittedly sentence structure still needs work.
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Sci-fi · Gravedagger
5 bucks says that's what's locked up on earth.
So when Arc heard there's Dragon on Beast Forest he was shocked. Because according to Adam the Dragons hated Adam and his kin. Mainly because they are the ones who hunted the dragons.. And it was Adam who locks up the king of Dragon with the help of the gods.
Sci-fi · Gravedagger
Just how lazy can you be, author? At least throw in some random letters and numbers, not just go XX XXX XXX XX XXX...
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Sci-fi · Gravedagger
"come to us to fight" meaning his drones ambushing them while they're simply flying through space?
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Sci-fi · Gravedagger
That's equivalent to someone in New York seeing someone walking East along the street and "calculating" that they're headed to Beijing.
"I calculated their possible destination base on the trajectory they are going." Said Eve, she then displayed several possible destinations.
Sci-fi · Gravedagger
This needs some serious editing. I've seen MTLs with better grammar and sentence structure.
ch 126 Supervision Cooperation
Sci-fi · YuuZu
That's not an Asian thing, that's a poor thing. I'm from Europe, and we did this as well when I was a kid. Shampoo, juice, shower gel,..., basically everything that could be mixed with water, we always added water to when the bottle was "empty", to get one last use out of the product.
He ran to the bathroom and opened up the tap to fill up half of the bottle with clean water. He then shook the bottle repeatedly.
Sci-fi · 9 lightyears per second
Snowden didn't escape to Russia. He was on his way from Hong Kong to Ecuador, and while he was in Russia waiting for his flight, the US cancelled his passport, leaving him stuck there.
Getting a Technology System in Modern Day
Sci-fi · Agent_047