Ashywar

10d

Commented

very stupid plot point. If all SHIELD agents have this then how was Clint able to hide when he got taken over by Loki. There are even more examples but this was just stupid and lazy.

ch 23 23. In a rut

A Ninja in the Marvel Universe

Movies · Story_Teller_229

Ashywar

22d

Commented

Everyone in the class is 5-6 years old. Do you even remember what you were like at that time in your life. I also don't understand how everyone is like propaganda is bad. It's normal to want to work for betterment of the society and people you grow up with. Those who don't are know as PSYCHOPATHS.

'Hey, why are you so bold with this propaganda? At this point any person with at least half a brain will see through it or at least will find that something isn't right, right?'

Naruto: Time Traveler

Anime & Comics · Sycore_w

Ashywar

22d

Commented

You are only going back 3 days. Not much difference if you train.

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Naruto: Time Traveler

Anime & Comics · Sycore_w

Ashywar

23d

Commented

Its not about sounding better, its about using a language properly.

I change Miras name to just be a double barrel surname since people keep complaining about the Nee bit. Personally I think it sounds better with the Nee but hey oh

HP/DC: Satan Soul

Anime & Comics · Bigbrick

Ashywar

3mth

Posted

initially the story started out good and was very interesting but now after 400+ chapters it's become dull and boring. There has been a new villain introduced whose existence doesn't make sense with the restrictions he has been operating in moreover the plot feels forced. I will probably check in 100 more chapters if there has been any improvement but presently it's not worth spending your money on.

Getting a Technology System in Modern Day

Sci-fi · Agent_047

Ashywar

6mth

Posted

Stop stealing other people's work. This story can be read fully on FanFiction.net. Webnovel needs to setup a system to report stolen works.

(..x..)

Anime & Comics · UchihaMadara_sama

Ashywar

6mth

Posted

This is a copy paste of someone else's work on Fanfiction.net. Support the actual author and read at the link below. It also has the full chapters.https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13801875/1/0

This book has been deleted.

Ashywar

7mth

Posted

very badly written with the story going all over the place.

Enigma of Tsukirai Hatake

Anime & Comics · Purplesplinter

Ashywar

11mth

Posted

Very badly written story with no character following any logic and more importantly no direction. The biggest thing is the inability of the author to understand the time periods involved and its effect on people and social development. If you want to kill your brain cells the please read this.

In Game Of Thrones World with LOTR system

Movies · Just_for_fun1997

Ashywar

11mth

Commented

Take your time bro. Health is the priority. We can wait for some chapters.

ch 116 CORN IS BACKKKK!!!

Fairy Tail: Shinigami

Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER

Ashywar

11mth

Commented

hope he gets better soon

ch 115 Update: From Corn’s friend.

Fairy Tail: Shinigami

Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER

Ashywar

11mth

Commented

+1

2. Naruto The Untouchable

Naruto The Untouchable (Completed)

Anime & Comics · kamidemond

Ashywar

11mth

Commented

bro don't want to nit-pick but if he wants to live as he wants there's literally no reason for him to stay on earth. He has the resources to explore the universe.

ch 0 5 Joining civilization.

Marvel's Sentinel

Movies · Neuromancerrrr

Ashywar

11mth

Commented

Man this kind of stuff needs to be edited. Not cool bro.

Of course, being a conscientious person, Josh despised human trafficking. But if it was selling Japanese chicks, that was another matter. Japanese were not humans, so there was no problem.