A Lone Swordsman Searching for The Truth
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Megalomaniacal: Previous times he expanded the limit, this time he broke through to a completely new level.
You can think of the first few attempts to forcefully increase the size of his exp wellThe Master of Cards · C63
Danyz: I hope you are feeling better soon and that this is not dropped 'cause it's so good. :(The Master of Cards · C93
decrease: This idea terrifies me. This book is so good and it would break my heart if he would actually succumb to it and couldnt continue writing it.The Master of Cards · C93
Dae196: Don't say that yooo I'd be sad if I lose a great one before it gets to the topThe Master of Cards · C93
Akhsic: I think the most suited for Amadeus is
The golden Dragon of eclipse
Because he have the sun and the moon
And he is very powerful like eclipse
The golden Dragon of eclipse
Is most suitedDying in the Middle of a Class Summoning · C16
Ghost1645: Maybe something to do with eclipsesDying in the Middle of a Class Summoning · C16
Adypoker: The Golden Dragon of Duality
The Golden Dragon of Yin-Yang
The Golden Dragon of Yin and Yang
Those are the names I believe describe him the best!Dying in the Middle of a Class Summoning · C16
DemonicPanda: It sounds like the Golden Dragon of Air ConditionersDying in the Middle of a Class Summoning · C16
Lucifart: *sigh* The ruiner sect is already lobbying for harem it seemsDying in the Middle of a Class Summoning · C1
G0D1Y: Damn, it's that snail again!!!
what happened to tdg?!!
this snail is very unreliable... so I really can't get hyped up hearing about a new work, but anyway 5 stars as an encouragement...Nine Astra Skies
Raishi: Okay just to remind you guys that in the first few chapters , there's a tenth element which is the Mind Element, and the author hasn't mentioned it again ever since the Formacist died, do you mind if i ask a clarification of it if the author has either forgotten it or smth? Thanks XDEverything will be my way! · C161
Everything will be my way! · C161
BlueSakura: A slave ark followed by another slave ark which is even longer, I can't imagine anything worse; it should just be one ark, at least then people reading won't expect anything different. The character is inconsistent being sometimes able to carry out random plans and other times being an idiot who wouldn't survive a day in a cruel world. The story is him being a slave at the moment which is alright for around 50 chapters max but it doesn't show any signs of ending soon. So overall, slow plot progression, inconsistent mc and not much of the story that's compelling to read; the only reason I got to around 40 chapters is that I was hoping that it would become better since it had potential.Everything will be my way!
wkwkwkwkwkwkwk: Why the **** does this novel have low ratings?
Why the **** does this novel have low ratings?
Why the **** does this novel have low ratings?
Why the **** does this novel have low ratings?
Why the **** does this novel have low ratings?The Sword Deity in Tokyo
yoursexypotato: Now that you've come this far already, did you ever consider that the reason why you're not understanding the logic behind the story is because of a language barrier?
Again, the decisions they make is based on their own abilities. They found an opportunity go get Samuel(no monsters during morning), so they get him. Simple as that! They took advantage of a loophole in the system and get rewarded for it. Thep characters did the logical thing, so why should they die? I explained this in the story. In fact, if Samuel died there, with his tunneling ability, he would have been stupid.
See here. IF I cheated his way out of it, then that would be bad. You can mock me for that IF that were the case. But that wasn't the case. Far from it. I didn't force Samuel's unnecessary death because Samuel had means of keeping himself alive. Just because he was left alone to fend for himself didn't mean that he should die.
Short bursts of power. You said that if it would be discussed in the future, then I should have at least hinted that he would become stronger. I did, didn't I? He fell of a cliff and was completely unharmed. If this did not trigger the transformation in him, I don't know what would. Did you perhaps overlook it?
When you say that it's your opinion, and not criticism, then it should not be posted as a Review. That is a comment. Here's the definition of review by Cambridge Dictionary: to think or talk about something again, in order to make changes to it or to make a decision about it.
"Choosest smallest to find a reason for criticism" Sigh. You don't understand. You put your comment on the synopsis as a Review, that is what makes it wrong. Did this ever come to you? Do you realize that Reviews are important for authors? It can build and tear down works. Your "Review" is tearing it down for only its synopsis. Why not delete it?Runes of Hecate
yoursexypotato: I don't discourage negative comments nor reviews prior to the end of the novel. However, please make it something that I could fix going forward. That's what constructive criticism is all about.
If this is how you usually review work, please wait until the novel is finished. That way you can say all you want that the novel is bad because of something that wasn't fixed ever.
I also checked your other reviews because you told me to. It turns out, you even reviewed a novel poorly WITHOUT EVEN READING IT. You only read the Synopsis and already deemed it bad.Runes of Hecate
yoursexypotato: It seems to me that your only issue is that you want someone dead to teach the protagonist a lesson. So just because I do not intend to make this happen, the novel is already bad? If that's the case, then your review is too shallow, is it?
The text is already there. They didn't die. Only the civilians did. This isn't something that I could fix going forward, is it?
You're saying that we should kill someone to punish the main character. After that, what happens? He doesn't participate in any fights anymore then the novel will end just like that? Do you think the main character has the time to mourn the deaths of his friends if they died, and train for 2 years to prevent any more deaths just like Monkey D Luffy did? No, he doesn't. Time is pressing onto him especially because of the Eclipse phenomenon. Even if all of his friends die, time won't stop. Sera City will be destroyed. There won't be time for Aeon to have this "baptism" you are talking about.
The problem with your review is that you have this false sense that character development should happen in the first 100 chapters through a single event. You don't consider it being progressive and accumulative.Runes of Hecate
yoursexypotato: Tbh, I can't understand your first paragraph. As far as I could tell, you're comparing some other novel to mine which I would discourage. This novel is unique in its own way. I'm not ranting about anyone in Monkey D Luffy's crew not dying, am I?
About their escape. There was an A-ranked mage guarding the students. Of course, they would be able to escape lol. In fact, they left without even encountering the Lake Beasts. How is this an issue?Runes of Hecate
yoursexypotato: Read this and your issue will be clarified. This has been there since I posted the chapter. This isn't something I edited to cater to your misinterpretation. Chapter 047: What Shouldn’t Be Here - An hour ago, the beasts should have already started leaving, so they could already exit the cave whenever they want.
They had been observing the area for a few days now so they were actually quite familiar with the area. They knew where some beasts stayed, and they knew where birds built up their nests.
After confirming that the area was indeed clear, the group picked up the pace and started running. They couldn’t waste any more time, after all. After half a day, they should be able to reach the camp.
They know when the Lake Beasts(the ones you are referring to) are not there. They have been staying there for a few days already and have already done the "studying" that you are suggesting.
Groupings are not weird. There's the concept of mage classes(Seran and Remoran). Remorans need Seran to basically tank for them while they cast magic from behind. That's just the general idea of it. Of course, they could do solo, but to be on the safer side which the Academy also took into account, they train in groups.Runes of Hecate
yoursexypotato: Chapter 40: The Strongest Team - When Mark was patrolling the area around the cave they were about to search, he realized that, somehow, the path towards the area where the Ur Trees grow was devoid of magical beasts. There were absolutely no monsters.
It was too silent that it could be described as eerie.
Suddenly, they thought about something.
Instead of searching for the Spirit Fox Gem, they did not enter the cave they were supposed to search and moved at full speed towards the Ur Trees. After two hours of continuous running, they finally arrived on site. Thankfully, the area was also deserted.
Mark informed them that there were no magical beasts in that area for half a day. This was not something they would do out of recklessness. This was not risking the lives of many to save one. After they confirmed this happening, they went and exploited it.Runes of Hecate
yoursexypotato: 3. "the protagonist manages to shiver with anger and pay no attention to the sores etc., while less experienced students stay calm"
Which character are you referring to? Because for sure this isn't Aeon. He only loses his composure by the end of Season 1, but you didn't reach that so you shouldn't have known about it.
Less experienced students stay calm? They are all without experience. Everything is new to them.
4. "the protagonist despite having "suffered" because of his own recklessness remains reckless and even this punishment has a very weak effect"
IMO, outside of the part where he gets blasted in the entrance examination, he didn't really do anything extreme that resulted in "suffering." Usually, when that's the case, humans don't change their ways. We always think, "Well, I didn't get hurt, didn't I?"
5. "creates a sword technique"
This isn't an Eastern Fantasy. His sword technique, although flashy, is garbage. You think it's easy making a sword technique? You should be thinking about this as an experienced reader. This would be brought up in the future, of course. Someone is bound to point this out.
6. "ancient constitution"
Where did you get this? There is no such term. Even if you copy and paste every chapter in a Word document and search for the word ancient, nothing would pop up. I haven't used the word ancient in the whole novel so far.
7. "nobody dies"
Oh, boy. Do you know why this novel is tagged as tragedy even before anybody dies? Because people will.
8. "since the protagonist defeats or manages to escape everythin"
If you reached the end of Season 1, you'll know that the protagonist himself dies, being unable to escape.
If you did not find this reply enlightening, then I apologize. Also, sorry for my tone. It just infuriates me when people point out things that are already addressed but they just don't know about because they didn't read the story further.Runes of Hecate
yoursexypotato: When I started reading your review, honestly, I was really happy. I thought I could make some substantial changes based on feedback(I've made a couple of changes based on comments alone). However, after reading into it and finding out that you misinterpreted lots of things, I realized that it's not a reliable basis for any changes I could make. Sorry about that.
Let me point out some details for you because it seems to me that you misunderstood a lot of details in the story.
But before that, let me first apologize. After writing a bunch of chapters, I did realize that the mages'(the center of this novel) strength is portrayed vaguely. I thought that I was able to make things clear that they were essentially superhumans, even without awakening to an element. My poor attempt in portraying this is by showing rather than telling. Aeon's extreme speed, Samuel being able to survive without food and water for way beyond what humans can achieve, not dying when hit by gigantic creatures. It's poorly conveyed.
Alright, onto the clarification.
1. "because the hell they were in a forest full of animals stronger than them, acting strangely, grouping etc, and not only not reporting when they did not run away, that is, when they went to run away, he coincidentally finds stronger animals that will kill them, then the protagonist who was "sleeping" wakes up and finds a way with things easily"
Not all animals there were stronger than them. As I said, they are superhumans. If you're referring to them not being able to handle colossal beasts, then that's only natural. As I've stated in the story, mages start being able to take care of colossal beasts, one on one, at D-rank.
I don't see grouping as acting strangely, tbh. Also, they did not run away. It was Levi who drew the line that portrayed their estimated limit. Not the academy staff. They knew about potentially dangerous areas and Levi already took that into account.
As to why they "coincidentally" find stronger animals that will kill them, isn't this in the title already? "Chapter 47: What Shouldn't Be There" As far as they know, those things shouldn't be there. The chances of that happening is slim to none, so they found no reason to prepare for it. And it was explained later on why they happened to be--because those creatures were planning to leave the forest and are moving towards the camp's direction.
About his power-up, this was essential to lead to the closing of the first volume. However, you did not get to that, considering that you stopped at ch75.
2. "the teachers who they should be smart and knowledgeable act childish and inexperienced (going out into a clearly foreign forest and unable to escape when they get into trouble)"
How much did you actually absorb in the story to come to this conclusion? Long before the students went to Grey Forest, the people of the Florentine Empire have been there multiple times already to purge it of magical beasts. I've stated this clearly. In fact, I mentioned in the story that their recent Purging is only a few months ago. The Forest is in NO WAY foreign. You'll find out later if you continued reading that even the principal went to that forest a few years ago lmao.
If you're referring to it being foreign to the students, they have maps. They were briefed about dangerous areas(as I've said they know about the forest already). They were reminded to stay close in the outskirts. They were about to challenge the deeper parts, but when they saw the "Strongest Team" get destroyed, they were about to turn back. They only proceeded because Samuel was left behind.
You advocate "I would prefer that he had lost the game to enter the magic academy, and had entered the military academy, would bring more weight in history" but don't encourage unforeseen events?
Unable to escape? But they did.Runes of Hecate
iTzLelouch: 돌아온 전설 사냥꾼 the name in KR, now the question is to find a free website..........................................................................Return of the Legendary Hunter
FilledWithHope: He lost to a girl...Worlds Defenders · C4
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