A reading enthusiast currently studying LAW in South Africa :)
2017-06-11 Joined South Africa
What fallacious logic; I'm almost gawking at the irrationality of this all.
ch 60 A Man Must Learn How To Pay His Debts
Fantasy · Elyon
Rather use incomprehensible instead of un-understandable.
ch 500 [Juvenile Ancient]!
Games · Adui
Way too much usage of 'this'. 'this aura' 'this glossy colour' Rather use 'a' or 'an', 'this' would indicate that we have already been introduced to the thing you are mentioning for the first time. We have not been introduced to it yet.
ch 0 6 An Immediate Lead
Eastern · CosmicPrime
This is a stolen novel! The actual novel can be read on Royal Road. Try not being so pathetic next time. ...............................................................................................