Fito

Fito

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2017-10-04 Joined Global
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Fito
Fito
10 days ago
Posted

The story starts off interesting, but it's just a bad translation. The author just took a story and added the viral evolution thing to the title, which has nothing to do with it. The MC has no powers or system; he's just an ordinary person with some skill.

Fito
Fito
1 months ago
Commented

Well, the MC's objective has always been that of a spiritual mentor, so it's fine to look for other heroes.

Fito
Fito
1 months ago
Posted

The story is interesting, although the use of AI is noticeable but acceptable. The plot progresses slowly but it seems to be heading in the right direction. The only negative thing I see is that the MC tries to keep his powers a mystery, but his lies are obvious and he seems idiotic. Everyone knows he's lying, even about things that aren't part of the system.

Fito
Fito
6 months ago
Posted

A translation of a Chinese novel, the plot is average, the MC's power system is weak and he becomes strong by doing nothing, it has its interesting parts and is enough to read while you find something better to read.

Fito
Fito
7 months ago
Posted

The story seems promising, but the main character acts like a madman. He can't talk about certain topics and spouts nonsense. There's a lack of a well organized system and inventory, the mc arrives at camp with an empty backpack, but it automatically fills up the next day, which is very suspicious and everyone notices. Also, the main character can use his powers in front of other people, so the other restrictions don't make sense. Otherwise, I think the author could polish the story better in the future.

Fito
Fito
7 months ago
Posted

The story is interesting, but the plot moves slowly and the MC acts as if he can't change the plot and everything has to go very slowly. It's also unclear what the MC's objectives are, and the only negative thing is that the system is too active.

Fito
Fito
7 months ago
Commented

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Fito
Fito
10 months ago
Commented

It would be interesting if what ends up making the MC rich is that stupid book.

Fito
Fito
11 months ago
Commented

+1

Fito
Fito
11 months ago
Commented

+1

➡️ Or stick to the original plan and build his own silent strike unit?

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