The story seems promising, but the main character acts like a madman. He can't talk about certain topics and spouts nonsense. There's a lack of a well organized system and inventory, the mc arrives at camp with an empty backpack, but it automatically fills up the next day, which is very suspicious and everyone notices. Also, the main character can use his powers in front of other people, so the other restrictions don't make sense. Otherwise, I think the author could polish the story better in the future.
The story is interesting, but the plot moves slowly and the MC acts as if he can't change the plot and everything has to go very slowly. It's also unclear what the MC's objectives are, and the only negative thing is that the system is too active.
Morning: Chinese, Math, English, Physics.
Anime & Comics · Horizon_Studios
It would be interesting if what ends up making the MC rich is that stupid book.
+1
➡️ Should I keep it slow?
TV · 1_Amethyst_1
+1
➡️ Or stick to the original plan and build his own silent strike unit?
TV · 1_Amethyst_1
It seems the plot is getting too complicated.
+1
This book has been deleted.
Well, after more than 20 chapters, not much happens. The story progresses slowly with many explanations and it seems that nothing interesting happens. It seems that the author plans to develop the story slowly. On the other hand, the MC's objectives are not clear. It seems that he has a mission and once it is finished, he will simply leave as he did before.
A translation of a Chinese novel, the plot is average, the MC's power system is weak and he becomes strong by doing nothing, it has its interesting parts and is enough to read while you find something better to read.
The Ninja’s Burden: Uchiha Jin and the Third War
Anime & Comics · Overlord02