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A Nascent Kaleidoscope.

A Nascent Kaleidoscope.

Anime & Comics · AStoryForOne

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After 800 chapters and with a rough idea of ​​how the novel will end, I think it's time to leave my review. It is a story with interesting ideas in which the author tries to fix the mistakes he made in his previous novel. He unfortunately he does not make it. The author presents a great world to explore but we hardly ever see it. The protagonist spends most of his time studying magic, which is not bad but will bore anyone with a desire for adventure. The battles are boring and for many chapters it will feel monotonous that the MC only uses fireball. The author opens many subplots that had potential but for some reason he decided to ignore causing major holes in the story. At first the world is presented as a game and little by little it is revealed that this world is more than it seems. Unfortunately the moments that should have been important and key in the story, the author did not know how to show them (the first time he uses magic in the real world, it should be an important moment where he would question various things and change his vision of the world forever ... anyone who gets there will be disappointed) Romance is very forced and unnatural. Despite having created a foundation for a couple of relationships, these never end and force others that don't make much sense. Coming to chapter 800 where most of the main mysteries have been revealed, I must say that the story got so silly that I couldn't help but compare it to a Hollywood movie. You just have to change China for the US where only they can save the world XD Conclusion: Although the story is full of script holes, it is not a bad read to pass the time, considering that there is nothing better to read ……… If you don't mind that the US… I mean China are the chosen ones, you can get to enjoy it. PS: Written with Google Translate

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Eastern · MyLittleBrother

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Video Games · El_Don

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