Melayu

Melayu

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Melayu
Melayu
1 years ago
Commented

Is the author deliberately making paragraphs repetition to rack up number of words in the chapter?

Melayu
Melayu
Melayu
2 years ago
Replied to DaoistkSpec02

obviously there's no proofreader for this work....

When Zhao Hai saw that Ge Lin had arrived, he immediately went up to him and said,"Grandpa Grimm, have we arrived?" They were now waiting for the magidle Chamber of Commerce to deliver the rabbits that green had bought, which was why Zhao Hai asked.

Living In Another World With A Farm

Living In Another World With A Farm

Eastern · Ming Yu

Melayu
Melayu
4 years ago
Commented

I'd say that the novel concept is interesting but after enduring 18 chapters, i find the mc development is too fast. the storyline is sketchy and not developed well. certain plot advancement are missing making it confusing to the readers.

Melayu
Melayu
4 years ago
Commented

MC's personality was changed too. He did not care if his actions killed so many innocents.

Melayu
Melayu
4 years ago
Commented

author totally butchered the plot from chapter 229.....

Melayu
Melayu
4 years ago
Commented

did author changed the plot? 1st Mo Ling was erased, then Manman changed to a young woman and also seems to have been with MC for quite a long time from her monologue.

Melayu
Melayu
4 years ago
Commented

what happened to Mo Ling?

Melayu
Melayu
4 years ago
Replied to Melayu

sorry I should say coins instead of SP

Melayu
Melayu
4 years ago
Commented

good thing that these earlier chapters are still free to read with all the repetitions. If these cost us SP, it will be very annoying. author please take note