Melayu

7mth

Replied to DaoistkSpec02

obviously there's no proofreader for this work....

When Zhao Hai saw that Ge Lin had arrived, he immediately went up to him and said,"Grandpa Grimm, have we arrived?" They were now waiting for the magidle Chamber of Commerce to deliver the rabbits that green had bought, which was why Zhao Hai asked.

Living In Another World With A Farm

Eastern · Ming Yu

Melayu

2yr

Commented

I'd say that the novel concept is interesting but after enduring 18 chapters, i find the mc development is too fast. the storyline is sketchy and not developed well. certain plot advancement are missing making it confusing to the readers.

ch 18 A Huge Harvest

Xianxia: Started With 9999 Luck Value

Eastern · Zhang Qing Tian Xia

Melayu

2yr

Commented

MC's personality was changed too. He did not care if his actions killed so many innocents.

ch 263 Chaos Fire Body

Xianxia: My Disciples are Insane!

Eastern · Baby Rush

Melayu

2yr

Commented

author totally butchered the plot from chapter 229.....

ch 260 Primal Chaos Fire Spirit Pearl

Xianxia: My Disciples are Insane!

Eastern · Baby Rush

Melayu

2yr

Commented

did author changed the plot? 1st Mo Ling was erased, then Manman changed to a young woman and also seems to have been with MC for quite a long time from her monologue.

ch 250 Half-step Emperor. Shi Shan Was Furious

Xianxia: My Disciples are Insane!

Eastern · Baby Rush

Melayu

2yr

Commented

what happened to Mo Ling?

ch 246 Li Feng’s Hatred

Xianxia: My Disciples are Insane!

Eastern · Baby Rush

Melayu

2yr

Replied to Melayu

sorry I should say coins instead of SP

ch 16 Tidying Up the Harvest, News of the Three Disciples

Xianxia: My Disciples are Insane!

Eastern · Baby Rush

Melayu

2yr

Commented

good thing that these earlier chapters are still free to read with all the repetitions. If these cost us SP, it will be very annoying. author please take note

ch 16 Tidying Up the Harvest, News of the Three Disciples

Xianxia: My Disciples are Insane!

Eastern · Baby Rush

Melayu

2yr

Commented

Chapters 8, 9, 10 & 11 have conflicted plot for the 2nd disciple recruitment. Author please clean up the plot and delete the unnecessary chapters.

ch 11 The Fight for the first seat

Xianxia: My Disciples are Insane!

Eastern · Baby Rush

Melayu

2yr

Commented

Since MC knows light heal magic, why doesn't he use it to heal his arm?

ch 38 Start of Class 1

The Evolution of a Goblin to the Peak

Fantasy · DonnEll

Melayu

2yr

Commented

The top of the mountain is called a summit. Submit means to surrender.

ch 0 1 Checked In For 10 years! How Many Hidden Old Demons Are There In This World?

Xianxia: My Junior Sisters Are Freaks!

Eastern · You You Jiang Jiang!

Melayu

2yr

Commented

Even if Otis have an average height for 19 years old, of course he'll be very tall compared to MC who's a midget that's 1 meter tall.

ch 14 Luxurious Accommodations

World Magic: I Awakened Light and Dark Magic Attributes

Fantasy · Truly Miserable

Melayu

2yr

Commented

Hughes is one meter tall!!! MC is a midget!!!

ch 13 Lach Academy of Magic

World Magic: I Awakened Light and Dark Magic Attributes

Fantasy · Truly Miserable

Melayu

2yr

Commented

Hmmm, is Zhang Hui a he or a she? Make up your mind author....

ch 80 Your Equipment Is Good

I Really Am Not The Lord of Demon

Urban · Blind Leek

Melayu

2yr

Posted

The plot of the story is great. However, sometimes it gets confusing due to inconsistency of the names for the characters, kingdoms, troops, etc. etc. Also, there are a lot of redundancy in sentences in each chapter which hampers and reduce the enjoyment of reading the story. It would be nice if author can have the chapters proofread before uploading it.