Bladthorks

1mth

Commented

Alan is the mage, it should be Lily or Lucas

"Why the hell are there creatures here?" he shouted, but there was no one to answer him. All he knew that he was fighting against that archer, and winning, when a bunch of monsters suddenly leapt his way, throwing him off guard and landing a couple of heavy hits, depleting his hp.

VRMMORPG: Rebirth of the Strongest Necromancer

Games · AstridStorm

Bladthorks

1mth

Commented

Years of training? the Game just launched a few days ago

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VRMMORPG: Rebirth of the Strongest Necromancer

Games · AstridStorm

Bladthorks

4mth

Commented

The plot making is good, and the world that the author present to us has a lot of possibilities. But, and is a big fat BUT, keep changing material, names, and a lot of things in every new chapter, don't have a consistency along de chapters

ch 15 Chapter 15: Familiar Routine