Raiohosore

Raiohosore

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Raiohosore
Raiohosore
3 days ago
Replied to UchihaXD

It’s more that ai (all of them from my experience) defaults to a collection of phrases and usages that after a point tend to immediately flag.

The Council had listened the way they always listened, which was to say each of them had been ignoring most of his report and had been composing their next statement the entire time. They were shrewd, politically arrogant, and allergic to inconvenient truths, and the longer Minato dealt with them the more they reminded him of the Hokage's old advisors.

The Silent Fairy

The Silent Fairy

Anime & Comics · UchihaXD

Raiohosore
Raiohosore
3 days ago
Commented

This paragraph has too much of the ai latency. Especially the first phrase - “they did x like they always did x”

The Council had listened the way they always listened, which was to say each of them had been ignoring most of his report and had been composing their next statement the entire time. They were shrewd, politically arrogant, and allergic to inconvenient truths, and the longer Minato dealt with them the more they reminded him of the Hokage's old advisors.

The Silent Fairy

The Silent Fairy

Anime & Comics · UchihaXD

Raiohosore
Raiohosore
7 days ago
Posted

The man’s call to action worked. This is a good fic for those that like a fairy tail story that is actually fairy tail in both vibe and structure. The writing for now feels somewhat mechanical though that is reducing the more I read. I’ve followed this novel for a short while so I can’t really comment on the update schedule apart from saying that as far as I’ve followed it, it’s been consistent. Minato feels sufficiently minato and the consequences of his presence are logical. That being said, my one major gripe with this is the harem tag. Have grown to dislike the harem element of most stories with only a rare few doing it well. Let’s hope this author gets that correct as well.

Raiohosore
Raiohosore
8 days ago
Replied to Joe_Mama_7665

It’s from Skyrim - in game it’s supposed to be the language of dragons

Raiohosore
Raiohosore
8 days ago
Commented

Sounds like dovazul

Raiohosore
Raiohosore
22 days ago
Posted

Love this piece of work. I was honestly just going to give it a try when I had nothing else to read cause cyberpunk isn't really my thing but I binged the entire thing (upto chapter 42) in one sitting over less than an hour. Story developments were insanely interesting all things said and it makes me enjoy Ace's character a lot more than most other FFs. The only thing I gripe with is the character that the MC transmigrates as, though even that is at best minor and fully upto personal preference to leave the main cast untouched. Eitherways GG, I look forward to the future of this work with great interest XD

Raiohosore
Raiohosore
2 months ago
Posted

Its a good and interesting story so far. I'm at ~ 35 chapters in and have given it a rest so I can stockpile a ton of chapters to read at once. The main character could do with some development but considering the nascency of the story I can't really frame that as a critique as much as an expectation. The side characters are fairly one-note so far, but again considering how early it is into the story that isn't actually a complaint. The plot contrivances are forgivable for now, but I would like some more world building. Regardless, kudos to you author, and We will Watch Your Career with Great Interest XD

Raiohosore
Raiohosore
2 months ago
Commented

something something "the taste of a demoness" (lotm reference for those not in the know)

Loki stopped her actions and looked back up at Yuji, waiting for him to continue, "Let's just say that my… birth wasn't conventional." Something dark glinted behind his eyes but disappeared just as quick before the two caught it. "I can't go into specifics, and I don't want to, but wouldn't it be possible through the use of magic?"

Orario’s Curse: Is it wrong to want a peaceful life this time around?

Orario’s Curse: Is it wrong to want a peaceful life this time around?

Anime & Comics · Suploly

Raiohosore
Raiohosore
2 months ago
Commented

Why do I think it was gallet doing it for shits and giggles

"As for everyone else, there aren't many who could do it. But one thing is certain—"

The Professor at Hogwarts Is the Dark Lord, and That's Totally Normal

The Professor at Hogwarts Is the Dark Lord, and That's Totally Normal

Book&Literature · BlurryPinkSnake

Raiohosore
Raiohosore
3 months ago
Commented

too many exclamation points hurt my eyes. A single one works just fine

"Professor Dumbledore!!!!" His thoughts finally caught up, and he found himself yelling and running towards the old man in the crater…

Dumbledore: The White Lord

Dumbledore: The White Lord

Anime & Comics · moonpie_99

  • Remnants of the Hollow Hour: a BleachXLoTM Crossover original

    Remnants of the Hollow Hour: a BleachXLoTM Crossover

    Anime & Comics ISEKAI ANIME SUPERNATURAL

    They called his zanpakutō cursed — a sword that whispered in tongues that had no business being spoken. On a doomed patrol, a Hollow’s claws should have finished him. Instead, he was displaced, not for the first time. Dragged through a rift, a forgotten Shinigami awakens in the fog-choked streets of Backlund, Fifth Epoch. His asauchi is shattered, his soul unstable, and the only thing keeping him alive is swallowing potions from a pathway that never existed — the Last Dusk. Can a man cursed to be forgotten leave a mark on a world built on fate? *** Very Cool AI blurb: He was supposed to die a Shinigami. Instead, he woke up in Backlund with half a sword, too much ink in his veins, and a future that doesn’t exist. Now he drinks potions, writes eulogies for the living, and laughs at his own funeral—because someone has to. ** What to expect: 1. Nice MC with a little bit of what seems to be a mental issue 2. Superficial knowledge of the LoTM verse (While I've read it twice, I haven't gone over it with a fine toothed comb like some of y'all have) 3. On Klein's side, cause I really like Klein's character 4. I wanted to write something that I really enjoyed, and since the job I currently have doesn't give me too much time, most of my chapters are going to be written with AI aid (though I go over each of them, make sure they fit the direction I want the story to go in and don't sound like the terminator after one-too many coffees) 5. Please point out any inconsistencies or continuity points that turn up in the story 6. While I am aware of COI and have read portions of it, I haven't finished it and therefore I will not be adopting canon from it.

    3 Chs 12 Collections

  • Undying Will original

    Undying Will

    Others ADVENTURE COMEDY ONE PIECE

    3.64

    When our dear mc meets god, the only thing he could think of, was that God should not see his embarrassing life, especially not his fetishes. Follow along Gol D Lorean, as he adventures the high seas! ****#########*****#*##*#*#*#*#####*## I suck at summaries, if y'all like one piece Id advise that you look at it, the mc will be op, but not by much, at least at the begining. No harem, a little romance, above average intelligence mc also can be expected! Even if mc is dumb, the author shall use his supreme ability to give PLOT credit for his smart deductions!! ?

    176 Chs 2.4k Collections

  • In the fairy tail world!!! WAIT WHAT!?!?!! *DROPPED!!!!!* original

    In the fairy tail world!!! WAIT WHAT!?!?!! *DROPPED!!!!!*

    Others

    When Cain died he didn't think that he would wake up to the screech of a dragon. His head ringing with a snarky system and his body being somewhat..... Tiny. Let the adventure begin

    3 Chs 123 Collections