What a trash review. There are already a lot of edgy, emo MCs in Naruto fanfics. If you want to read the same thing a thousand times over, that's your choice, but don't try nagging anyone who is trying to make something different.
What is the logic from trying to eat someone who fights when there is a lot of injured guys right next to him?
This would be the dream however the author just made him a Capitan level with Mihawk incomple power and the bleach power system is basically ignored
I don't know, this first chapter is just too much chinese. I don't say it like a curse or anything like that, however it is too similar a N different Naruto fanfics that I read before
The shampoo part really bothers me. Anyone who loves hiking and camping knows that you should never, under any circumstances, use shampoo in a lake. The first time this was mentioned, I took a deep breath and ignored it. But since the author insists on this error, I felt the need to correct it
Ty
Yeah, probably this is the end of this novel for me, there are too many clues about a future heavy nationalism for me to continue.
Keanu Reeves's age in 91 was 26 years I couldn't see him like a a retired veteran
Too much info dump
Hmmmm Maybe I will stop here. Nothing against your story, however his motivation is just too overused, 90% of GOT fanfics in this site has this exactly same objective.
In Westeros with Yujiro Hanma Physique
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