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We were born alone, we were also doomed to die alone. But on that fateful night, he didn't die alone. That's his biggest regret. If only he gets a second chance. He will make sure... His family... his comrade... would be safe... From that traitor... *Modern Fiction* Betrayed by the most trusted person in his family, cost him his parents. They were at war against each other. Trying to win back something they believed were supposed to be theirs. He lost the game, also his life, his remaining family, friends, and comrade. All because of that traitor. Now that he is back. He will not fall into that death trap again. Even if he can't remember it. He won't fail. He will protect everyone. Alfizar looked at the face he sees every day in the mirror. "Nothing's wrong with it, but.... shouldn't my face look older?" Time passed by quickly and he realized that he had indeed died. But, who killed him? A/N: I'm back to my 3 chaps a week after a month of updating every day. For those who worried that I won't complete this original, don't worry. I will finish this original soon, story progress 49%.
DemonLordofMadness: He should buy the camelCrazy Detective · C13
Grasshorse: The system messages look like fortune telling... And in Chinese (and Japanese which I'm more familiar with) the fortunes are often difficult to immediately understand even for regular native speakers. It's not a big deal if you have the paper to look at and read carefully, but if it's just being said to you once I don't think our MC is the only one who would have trouble ^^Crazy Detective · C12
G0D1Y: hahahaha Mc is one hell of a funny man!!!Crazy Detective · C11
SaintBookwormLich: So far🤔 it was worth my the energy stones, it’s a shame it took it so long for this novel to win... so underestimated.
PS. The novel portrait doesn’t help... it’s a little tacky 😅...Crazy Detective · C10
SwiftDe_thX: The shameless are truly invincibleCrazy Detective · C8
Scarlet_Rain: The system isn't too bad. If anything it is a good way for the author to explain why he is getting involved so easily with all those cases.Crazy Detective · C7
Mexulexi: I love this novel, it's entertaining to read but you gotta be kidding me. There is no way it took 10 years for someone to think "hey maybe a gang didn't kill him, it looks more like a hate crime". Like reallyCrazy Detective · C6
JKingSniper: Dang the best police is one of the criminalCrazy Detective · C5
Blissful: Those are some brave female patients, too bad for them that Ling Ran is respectful. 😂Also, don’t keep your hopes up, Ms. Nurse. He has no girlfriend but that’s because he’s married to his job. There’s no place for anyone else.Great Doctor Ling Ran · C77
KilledbytheDead: Perhaps it's the authors way to show his love for transformers .... Might be a transformer super fanGreat Doctor Ling Ran · C8
void893: The English is not the worst but needs a lot of improvement.
Right now the novel doesn’t flow along at all. It feels jagged with how key transition words are usually missing from the sentences.
Also the author usually tells without showing.
(What I mean by that is that a lot of actions are told to us when they don’t need to be explicitly pointed out)
Example of how it should be : I walked over to where my mum lounged in her chair, relaxedly flipping through a novel, I had to cough lightly to grab her attention “*Kehum* .. mum can I talk with for a second” mum finished the last line she was on before looking up at me “sure thing honey, what’s up?”
Example of what it is right now : I walk over to mum reading book with my book and ask her “mum can I talk something” she look up and says “sure honey what you want to talk to?”
Do you see the problem??
One reads like something soft while the other is like a jagged razor blade.
It breaks immersion.
I’m not saying is English is easy but if you’re gonna write in it then you’re gonna need to do more than that.Rebirth 1973 · C1
CocoaButter: I am taking this novel as a light read novel. Do NOT be serious about the lack of common sense in some chapters like this one. Ren's character is great, the storyline is tolerable and the system is interesting. Also the writing quality is superb and some of the side characters are hilarious. That's good enough for me anyways.Great Doctor Ling Ran · C75
Golden_Cloud: This is the time that you understand the meaning of “Don’t judge a book by its cover.” 😕😤
Anyway, I feel terrible for bullying this nook; I swear that all the power stones that I obtain during this week, will be donated to the cause.Crazy Detective · C22
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