Totemic - Profile

I meant easy to read and understand from a grammar viewpoint not a plot viewpoint. I understand though the confusion regarding the start of the novel since it was chaotic but from my understanding that was what the author was going for.

And to all those who wondered there is only 149 chapters to the actual story counting the prologue but there are a few info chapters in the beginning that state the power system and stuff so I was also counting those

Latest chapter read (153) So far this is a complex novel with an equally complex MC. So if you like a simple MC and a straight forward plot this is not the novel for you. Although there is usually 1 or 2 grammar mistakes per chapter the novel itself is easy to read and understand. As for story development even though the author repeatedly stresses that the story is progressing slowly. From a reader's viewpoint the story is instead progressing very rapidly with different event occuring usually without sufficient build up. And due to the quick pacing several plot holes and inconsistencies occur. In terms of character design I feel as though the author has done a very good job in making a complex and mildly intelligent character with several personality issues. Skipping over update stability I feel as though the most glaring issue in the novel is it's World Background/ World development. This issue is mainly due to two reasons the stories pacing and the addition of other world too early in the story. First of all since the novel is only 153 chapters long at this point the 2nd issue I feel can easily be fixed as the story progress. However, the first issue namely the quick story pacing causes all three worlds to feel more like a PowerPoint slide than an actual world. Now by pacing (to make it clear) I am not criticizing the stories plot. I personally believe the plot is alright. What I am criticizing is how quickly the MC goes from one plot point to another with out sufficient build up to said event. The best example of this is how the MC went to fight the blood gang although the plot was sound, the lack of background of where the MC is, the history of the area ,why the blood gang was even in the area, and how the MC even knows the existence of the tribal area cause the entire scene to be a bit chaotic and confusing. Hopefully as the story continues the author is able to fix most of the issues of the story.