Pablo

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AUTHOR; KYUUKA NAME IS KUSAKA SOJIRO!! View More
Bleach System Within Bleach · C616
1 day ago

Pablo: Actually... thats REALLY common. Even more in a game where you can kill any player, even more in a zone with exp buff, as you want to get everything for your team and kill everyone else so they dont lower the exp and items you are getting, in those games i even killed a player that was farming ore because i was farming ore too =P

Fate Online: Shadow · C55
1 day ago
Actually... thats REALLY common. Even more in a game where you can kill any player, even more in a zone with exp buff, as you want to get everything for your team and kill everyone else so they dont lower the exp and items you are getting, in those games i even killed a player that was farming ore because i was farming ore too =P View More

rolas: i don't get what the problem of these players is? they're not in different camps and he is not rednamed. why would every fucking player attack him? i can understand once in a while. but this is the second time in a row? if it was me i would be like "That player is alone in this dungeon, he's probably strong, let's ask him to team up."

Fate Online: Shadow · C55
1 day ago
Also, why would amanda throw everything up and run away with MC if she just knew him as a co-worker and subordinate? she could have asked for help from jenny and be done with it View More
Fate Online: Shadow · C54
3 days ago

Pablo: I still say my opinion that you must fix the plot, With all the power that Jenny seems to have, not helping Amanda when she was being hunted down is a huge plot hole, even more is that WHY would she start working as the boss of a small restaurant if she played the game, was TOP player even, and earned tens of thousands doing so... and whats up with this interaction between jenny and michael?, if he knows her he should know how to speak with her, and at least he can say that he fell in love with amanda at fight sight or something

Fate Online: Shadow · C54
3 days ago
I still say my opinion that you must fix the plot, With all the power that Jenny seems to have, not helping Amanda when she was being hunted down is a huge plot hole, even more is that WHY would she start working as the boss of a small restaurant if she played the game, was TOP player even, and earned tens of thousands doing so... and whats up with this interaction between jenny and michael?, if he knows her he should know how to speak with her, and at least he can say that he fell in love with amanda at fight sight or something View More
Fate Online: Shadow · C54
3 days ago
unless there are goblins of that level also outside its impossible for another player to NOT have found the mine.... View More
Fate Online: Shadow · C48
5 days ago
how the hell players arrived before him!?... he left as soon as he got to lvl 10 View More
Fate Online: Shadow · C47
6 days ago
because the author is a beginner and ******* in writing and dosnt listen to advice and keep doing things wrong? View More

Keith_Cline: This time around. This time around.This time around. This time aroundThis time around. This time aroundThis time around. This time aroundThis time around. This time aroundThis time around. This time around. Whyyyy do you say this constantly!!!

World Development System · C22
1 week ago

dukroger: My dear author, because you keep repeating the end of the chapter at the beginning of the other, besides being annoying and annoying in reading, it gets bad for you, it makes it seem like you just want to increase letter count.

World Development System · C22
1 week ago
i will say this, but its clear as a day that author has no idea how to properly use numbers and how to put things correctly... 5.000 bottles of poison, even if each one is 100 ml, it would be 500 liters of poison. Why would he sell 5000 bottles and not some big containers instead? View More
World Development System · C18
1 week ago
Sooo blood there can last years inside a bottle LOL View More
World Development System · C16
1 week ago
Your novel would be a lot better if you dont shamelessly provide the last part of each chapter as the start of the next to get more SS View More

autistic25: Hello guys.this is Autistic25 here.this is my first time writing a novel.i hope you guys give me some slack by the way i don't mind support and compliments :P.

about the updates i will try to update it as much as possible every day if permitted.

This novel is quite a sci-fi vs magic novel plus there will be politics,business,kingdom building and wars as the main theme of this novel.

English is my second language so if there are mistakes please help.

Thank you for reading my novel.

P.S-i will shamelessly rate myself a 5 star for self-motivation :P.

World Development System
1 week ago

Nambi01: Keep adding the last two or three paragraphs of the last chapter once we have to pay and I'll dump this read rather fast.

World Development System · C16
1 week ago

Jixyakku: I don’t mind how the story is going, you’ve got great writing but I have to ask why is John just throwing his ideas around like it doesn’t matter when they can be considered legendary to the area he is in?

World Development System · C16
1 week ago
Dude... you misplaced Eve with josephine "will snatch Josephine in front of this eyes" there you mean Eve View More
World Development System · C13
1 week ago
care to tell WHEN did the MC learnt to use magic? View More
World Development System · C13
1 week ago
So... they killed like 20-30 or so animals?... do they have magic bags or something? otherwise how they move around with so many things such as fur, bottles of blood, meat and others? View More
World Development System · C12
1 week ago
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World Development System · C11
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World Development System · C11
1 week ago

Pablo: YEAH!!! Throw fireballs at a firefox, im sure it works! lol

World Development System · C11
1 week ago
YEAH!!! Throw fireballs at a firefox, im sure it works! lol View More
World Development System · C11
1 week ago
Reading Status: C1
First of all, the novel needs an editor as there are a lot of mistakes in every chapter, second, the author needs to make better use of numbers, math and quantities since its clear as a day that he is just using numbers without any previous thought and hope it works... Who knew that 18 hours 100 times faster is 18 minutes.... 18 hours is 1080 minutes and 100 faster is about 11 minutes... also making 2000 soap bars in 4 days.... in a village.. dude what are you smoking lol, just getting enough fat and enough lye for all that will take weeks.... sell each soap bar at 3 gold each?.... where a common person gets about 40 copper daily and a bread cost 2-5 copper, meaning he sold the soap at 3.000.000 copper each SOAP BAR!!!!! when a common person earns about 1600 copper a month
the soap bars should have been sold at 3 silver instead.

About the AI? its super annoying, its supposed to help out the mc, maybe even become friends with it, offer advice etc..., but so far the AI all it does is mess up with MC and aside from the computing ability to memorize all things and cross-reference them to find out flaws and all, it just there... doing nothing.
Another thing is that the MC is giving important knowledge and gifting blueprints left and right!! he goes to introduce the crops rotation without any thought, he allowed the carpenter guys to use his blueprints of modern furniture and houses just like that, he should have at least sold them or asked for a discount on his house... If he wanna become big then he cannot gift things like that and must get proper compensation or he will get owned View More
World Development System
1 week ago
just to note, but making compost from feces takes weeks View More
World Development System · C8
1 week ago

Pablo: Dude.... you need to work those numbers... how much animal fat and vegetable oil would he need for that!? its a village dude, not a city where he can buy 1000 liters of vegetable oil and animal fat,,,, In a village with a population of 700 aprox at most he should be able to produce 500 soap bars.... and that is animal fat, as vegetable oil is hard to make and takes a lot of materials to produce

World Development System · C6
1 week ago
Dude.... you need to work those numbers... how much animal fat and vegetable oil would he need for that!? its a village dude, not a city where he can buy 1000 liters of vegetable oil and animal fat,,,, In a village with a population of 700 aprox at most he should be able to produce 500 soap bars.... and that is animal fat, as vegetable oil is hard to make and takes a lot of materials to produce View More
World Development System · C6
1 week ago

Pablo: Wow... never knew that 1 hour had 100 minutes hahahahaha.... Dude you need an editor and work out your math

World Development System · C3
1 week ago
Wow... never knew that 1 hour had 100 minutes hahahahaha.... Dude you need an editor and work out your math View More
World Development System · C3
1 week ago

Pablo: what a waste of money buying the books. If i was there i would have asked to rent those books and pay at most 1 gold to be able to spend a day reading those, with Sarah, he only needs to read the books once-.

World Development System · C2
1 week ago
what a waste of money buying the books. If i was there i would have asked to rent those books and pay at most 1 gold to be able to spend a day reading those, with Sarah, he only needs to read the books once-. View More
World Development System · C2
1 week ago
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