hoping Sasuke doesn't try to leave. Many fanfics have Sasuke realize and respect Naruto after Naruto powered up but yet they still have Sasuke leave just to continue the plot. This Sasuke seems more mature and even though he wants revenge, he doesn't seem to be obsessed to the point he'll do dumb stuff.
ch 69 Naruto : Chapter 69
Anime & Comics · Doppins
basically killing the story since you have 1 love story that was written extremely well, paced properly and handled in a way not to be cringed or forced then you have another love interest who is only there cause of a bond and nothing more, then her character is pretty dull as she has no personalities and the mc doesn't even like her but he'll magically like her cause why not.... 😂 Went from Top tier to cliche and just another fanfic among many🤦♂️✌️
(A/N: Okay so because I have expanded this book a lot and want to try one this will be a harem, but no more then three girls. Who have already been picked out, Leah, Rosalie and mystery girl who I will include later. The Harem will be a slow build though to be more realistic to adding them into it, not all at once.)
Movies · Flaming_Lines
thanks for killing your own ff.
"It's complicated to say, but I was born with the memories of a person from another world, so you could say that I am old." Naruto spoke for the first time about his condition, this girl had already seen him do many things, so it wasn't that important anyway.
Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague
had a feeling the Uchiha girl would be a main cast but why make her so intrusive and ask for apprenticeship right off the bat. author could have had them have a short meet up every now and then before she tried to get involved in his life. way too sudden and now feels forced
ch 16 Chapter 16 - Uchiha Girl 01.
Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague
you just want him to fk her
ch 16 Chapter 16 - Uchiha Girl 01.
Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague
he's never done anything to maintain peace and balance, he's literally only tried to gain the upper hand and make sure he still has power only to fail and end up back at the start lol. He's also done a lot of things that could destroy peace and balance 😂 Anbu is made to do all those dark stuff, people acting like assassinations and manipulation of the political scene is something only danzo can do but that's clearly false. There's necessary evil and then there's being extra, Danzo was being extra lol
Danzo who got beaten and even got his eye dug out by the enemy didn't go through this in vain and his beating served a purpose.
Anime & Comics · Tobi_444
it's illogical for danzo to get off scot-free so you're not wrong. authors normally use the council as an excuse, or use the fact it'll cause disharmony and chaos in the village, or that danzo is the only person who can control the dark side of the leaf so he has to stay alive 😂 like it makes no sense unless you're forcing the plot or the other characters are just dumb
I wrote this chapter just for the consequences of Danzo. What do you think? I followed what I thought was most likely to happen. I could extend Danzo to become a villain for Naruto in the village, but after the massacre of the Uchiha clan, he wouldn't last long with Minato as Hokage. Minato would even punish the other elders in a way.
Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague
probably easier to write since they already pretty strong, yet they almost always seem to end up in the hands of writers who can't get past the "ooh dragon strong" phase🤦♂️
I told Varys I couldn't just accept the betrothal while I still had one with Sansa, but if like, we thought the betrothal broke I would accept under certain conditions, he would have to ensure safe return for Sansa and Arya to the north, if he provided that I would join his crusade to put a Targaryen on the throne.
TV · CORNBRINGER
nope, it's there. there really needs to be no response cause all you're arguing is that they're all cringe names which is true but the original names all fit the HP world and all reference magic related things or old British nobility which makes it less cringe and more fitting. Plus we've had 20+ years to condition ourselves to these names which make it feel even less cringe and more natural. The OCs name feels cringe given the settiongs, if this was a magical world leaning towards demon/holy magic type then the OCs name wouldn't be too strange. The name is very on the nose and kinda edgy and foreign to the HP world specifically and that's proven by how a lot of readers reacted immediately to it, they just felt it was out of place. It is what it is, it's cringe and people like it and some don't. What else you want? you ain't gonna convince people the name doesn't sound cringe to them when that's exactly how they feel😂
ch 0 1 Chapter 1 - Asmodeus
Movies · The_last_airbender
Shisui would be a good fit but not right now, I'd say it's better to have him as the kage-in waiting, basically have him be mentored and experience the political side first hand and Hiruzen asking his opinion every now and then.
ch 27 Volume III: Bonding Time Chapter 27: Will Of Fire
Anime & Comics · KotaroBokutoAce
Luke Skywalker is fitting for the genre it's based in, fitting for the next era the story is set in, makes sense for the time it was written in too. All the other names are fitting within the world's they're used and the time they were created, years later they become an iconic name that you don't find it weird. Making starwars today and naming those characters that would have a novelty slightly cringe effect, probably did back then too but after years of the name embedding itself it popcultre and influencing generations for decades, the name now isn't as cringe. A magical British world, set in the 80s-90s with a modern setting, a very outdated rarely used name is going to stand out like a sore thumb. It's just a matter of fact that naming is kinda important to keep the immersion. The author may come up with a great reason but it's most likely going to be demon related as that's the most accepted origin. The name sticks out in this setting even though Voldemort himself is a cringe name but as I mentioned earlier, Voldemort had decades for use to get used to the name lol
ch 0 1 Chapter 1 - Asmodeus
Movies · The_last_airbender
when is this stupid plot ending? boring af. had to skim thru this whole plot it was so boring 🤦♂️
ch 37 Long time Cumming (R-18)
Anime & Comics · IHaveHidden
not really worth it tbh, can totally skip the whole chapter and not miss out on anything
ch 37 Long time Cumming (R-18)
Anime & Comics · IHaveHidden
dude same, a lot of twilight fics are all unfinished and barely get passed the first movie lol.
Alice Cullen
The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)
Movies · Beans_on_a_tree