Badges 8
Moments 24
don't bet if you can't afford to lose
ch 143 Nice night trip
Returning To The Cultivation World Through A Game
Eastern · Saubi1234
The chapters are too short, I want more! Ty for the chapter though
ch 137 Challenging the Xiao clan
Returning To The Cultivation World Through A Game
Eastern · Saubi1234
I don't think "scream" fits here. That usually means "to cry out with a shrill voice, as in fright or extreme pain", and I don't think that's what you wanted to express. Maybe "shout" would fit better
About ten minutes after he entered the pavilion, a scream suddenly resounded outside the pavilion.
Returning To The Cultivation World Through A Game
Eastern · Saubi1234
Well this is quite unusual, telling us the whole game-world background/origin so fast in a novel, instead of it being slowly built up. I don't exactly dislike it, just hope you have some more misteries for our MC to uncover
ch 79 Ancient secret
Returning To The Cultivation World Through A Game
Eastern · Saubi1234
What in the world...
ch 78 This is just a game
Returning To The Cultivation World Through A Game
Eastern · Saubi1234
Sometimes being in the right isn't everything
ch 57 Cold Storage
New Life : A Second Chance
Urban · PsyberRose
Well that's just dumb
He endured it all, for he knew that he needed to be better in the company, sharper and more efficient. It would have helped if people actually showed him what was needed but he never blamed anyone. Kyle had always risen to the occasion, and would never blame other people. He'd look at the situation, find ways to improve and just did it. Xing Han wanted to emulate his role model, and thus, would never complain. Little did he know that this act of his impressed his father immensely; but of course. His father never showed it. He was the Head of the Household and could not afford to show favouritism or any sort of emotion, really.
New Life : A Second Chance
Urban · PsyberRose
How is being 5 feet at 12/13, as a girl, called "petite"?
She was a rather petite girl at only 5 feet tall, and of Chinese descent. Her hair was dark, cut in a bob style that framed her slightly round shaped face, reaching her shoulders. She had recently moved to the country when her father got transferred. Hence, her ignorance of the Smith Twins and the Elite Five.
New Life : A Second Chance
Urban · PsyberRose
What's it like in New York city?
They wouldn't be staying in this hospital for long anyway and once discharged, the house would be a far better place to be. The nursery was already ready, including the two nannies for the babies, and caretaker for Delilah during the confinement period.
New Life : A Second Chance
Urban · PsyberRose
In the last paragraph you just said he was 8y old...
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The Legend of Min Hong
Eastern · ORIGIN_ESSENCE
Author can you please stop changing your mind on the timeline/age of the MC? Either he is 10y and has spent 3y training the sword or he is 8y and has spent 1y to do so. Pick one, it's a huge turnoff to see such inconsistencies
ch 24 Infernal Wrath Hornet
The Legend of Min Hong
Eastern · ORIGIN_ESSENCE
oh so she's young now, you just said she was middle aged...
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The Legend of Min Hong
Eastern · ORIGIN_ESSENCE
I don't think he can steal grade A bloodlines yet
ch 157 Shameless Beyond Compare
The Bloodline System
Fantasy · TimVic
So... You're such a good alchemist but you're not going to take a single pill?
ch 74 Drink My Blood
Rise of The Anti God
Eastern · Resurgent
Why did he still not upgrade his monk class? And why would you be allowed to summon beasts, using an external item?
ch 248 Lightning God War Art, Eighth Form
Reincarnated With The Strongest System
Fantasy · Elyon