MrOrc

MrOrc

6mth

Commented

Thank you for the chapter

ch 47 Chapter Twenty Four - Part One: Get Some Rest

The Atlantian System

Fantasy · LE_Reinhart

MrOrc

6mth

Commented

Thank you for the chapter

ch 46 Chapter Twenty Three - Part Two: Group Huddle

The Atlantian System

Fantasy · LE_Reinhart

MrOrc

6mth

Commented

Thank you for the chapter

ch 45 Chapter Twenty Three - Part One: The Hearth Maiden

The Atlantian System

Fantasy · LE_Reinhart

MrOrc

6mth

Commented

Thank you for the chapter

ch 44 Chapter Twenty Two - Part Two: Dumb Hero

All in all it’s really good if nothing else I’d say that you need to be careful of falling into the problem of system novels of making the protagonist to powerful to quickly to the point where there is no challenge for them or what challenges do appear seem clunky and forced.

ch 42 Chapter Twenty One - Part Two: Weapon of Choice

The Atlantian System

Fantasy · LE_Reinhart

MrOrc

6mth

Posted

Honestly it’s a breath of fresh air for the app. I agree with the other when I say it’s a got a great story honestly I’d be happy to buy it off the shelf at any book store.

The Atlantian System

Fantasy · LE_Reinhart

MrOrc

6mth

Commented

It’s the same for me I love it. Please keep writing it.

ch 42 Chapter Twenty One - Part Two: Weapon of Choice

The Atlantian System

Fantasy · LE_Reinhart

MrOrc

8mth

Posted

I love how his story actually has depth and most of the key character don't fell like there forgotten about. plus I mean it's based of MTG so of course it's getting my seal fo approval.

Miracle Card Shop: All My Cards Can Be Actualize

Urban · RavenClaw471

MrOrc

1yr

Posted

honestly one of my favourite modern family fan fics to date.

Re:life with Karmic Gacha (Modern Family)

TV · Alittlepiggy33

MrOrc

1yr

Posted

i love it, please pick it back up. give me more, give me more, give me more

Star Wars: The Creation & Spawn System

Anime & Comics · ForceFromBeyond

MrOrc

3yr

Posted

honestly not a bad book, moves alittle slow but the world building is really good so it kinda makes up for that all in all a good read so far I am diffiently gonna recommend it.