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ch 46 Chapter Twenty Three - Part Two: Group Huddle
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ch 45 Chapter Twenty Three - Part One: The Hearth Maiden
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ch 44 Chapter Twenty Two - Part Two: Dumb Hero
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All in all it’s really good if nothing else I’d say that you need to be careful of falling into the problem of system novels of making the protagonist to powerful to quickly to the point where there is no challenge for them or what challenges do appear seem clunky and forced.
ch 42 Chapter Twenty One - Part Two: Weapon of Choice
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It’s the same for me I love it. Please keep writing it.
ch 42 Chapter Twenty One - Part Two: Weapon of Choice
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ch 47 Chapter Twenty Four - Part One: Get Some Rest
The Atlantian System
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