Badges 10
Moments 74
Is it really a punishment? If I was the MC, I would not attach a male cultivator to my wife's 'wedding' ring. I imagine he needs to be able to see and hear EVERYTHING in order to effectively protect her. Is he not just asking for a green hat.
Then he said, "Listen, shadow slave, from today onward I assign you as my Elizabeth's personal bodyguard. Alright, you can come out now."
The Supreme Satanic System
Fantasy · The_handsome_fatty
The whole situation escalated too quickly his, now, wife. She has only appeared in, maybe, one chapter, where the MC bit and then smashed her. Honestly, the harem characters lack depth. They all lack a personality that will allow readers to remember them. At this point, for me, I am remembering them via their species: Witch chick-1, Vampire chick-1, Human sister chick, Human eye chick, Angel chick-1 (1-8), etc. Their names are easily forgotten, so it takes me several paragraphs to remember who they are. It's okay to spend more time developing the personalities of your characters. Also, it costs over 550 years of life to freeze time for 1 second? Really?! So the MC just threw away over 330,000 years of his life to tame a dragon for his first wife and to erase the memory of a shadow slave that is now bound to him through a sort of soul contract? What is the point of this skill without the life steal ability? The MC needs to start harvesting the life force of all his enemies, since it's now being used as a cheap currency with shoddy conversion rates.
ch 254 Freeze!
The Supreme Satanic System
Fantasy · The_handsome_fatty
Who is Scarlett and when did he r@pe her? Sounds like r@pe because he did it forcefully. Is she that teacher with the illusion eye power?
ch 86 What happened three months before?
The Supreme Satanic System
Fantasy · The_handsome_fatty
Hopefully this extremely cringe way of thinking only sticks until he loses his virginity... Otherwise, it will be too difficult to read.
"Wow, this girl has such a beautiful, perfect body. Her boobs are rounded and full, but perky. And her sacred place down there. Wow, thanks to almighty I can see such a perfect piece of your artwork as your creation. " He praised her in his mind while observing all over her body up and down. Meanwhile, his body began to heat up and his little brother down there inside his pants also reacted as if it was admiring something.
The Supreme Satanic System
Fantasy · The_handsome_fatty
Awesome story so far .
ch 26 Devil's Wisdom Part 1, Cain's perspective!
My Enchanting System
Fantasy · Alen_Tanor
It seems like you're basing the outcome of the fight solely on simplified mathematics, but there are numerous other factors to consider. The protagonist should have developed various resistances by this point in the story. The sudden hostility from the 3rd prince contradicts earlier established logic, raising concerns about the integrity of the royal family and their ability to act arbitrarily. This undermines trust in their leadership. Additionally, the sudden weakening of the protagonist feels contrived and fails to consider their willpower. It also overlooks the fact that these characters are soul cultivators with limited knowledge in formations and physical strength.
ch 594 Result
Mixed Blessing System
Fantasy · RVN_1998
Why are more chains constantly being added as the MC gets stronger? Is it not supposed to be the other way around? As for the other women, I see no issue if he limits the amount of his essence he provides them during the climax. Just the act itself will not kill them, going by the current logic of this story. Also, I haven't said anything regarding my thoughts on the various seals placed on him. But, why does his father think he can break even with his son after only just sending him to a trial area, that he didn't even make, or control? He's done nothing at all to assist the MC. Only the red-eyed woman, most likely his mother, helped him during that time. However, he still took a huge L by giving away the dragon tooth. How much longer do we have to continue reading about a crippled cultivator? It's been over 500 chapters, and the MC is still trying to bring a knife to a gunfight. Luckily, due to plot armor, the MC has not faced any real experts, yet.
ch 505 Trouble
Mixed Blessing System
Fantasy · RVN_1998
110 chaps in and... - the MC is still a trash character that relies on outside sources as a crutch. -there has not been any mention of resolving his issues with his magic circuits. -he's been talking to a suspicious cat and making blood-pacts for answers he could have just asked his contracted familiar. I will stop here and not add more. I would have stopped here if I had to pay for the next chapter. Hopefully , I will reach a point in the story that will make me want to continue reading before the timers up. [img=sad]
ch 110 A Mystery That She Planned To Solve No Matter What
Strongest Warlock - Wizard World Irregular
Fantasy · Elyon
My boi doesn't even know just how much of a trash character he is... Nothing in the story has shown anything relative close to a fast power up. Honestly , at this point, he should just wish for another opportunity to reincarnate and hope for a better body in his next life.
Tyrion didn't wish to risk his life at the dimensional zones, but he needed to have a job involving such matters. As his growth was just too exponential.
I Regenerate 10,000 Times Faster
Fantasy · RagingArtPunk
Then please explain how the rank 4th girl can already purchase a level 2 skill and master it to her current level within 1 week? If there is no logic behind the story, there is no reason to read it. Especially on this platform where we are forced to pay to read each chapter. I'm a lot more forgiving on any other platform. But not here. Here, I'm a paying customer. I expect nothing less than skills equivalent to the great J. K. R. since books on this platform are usually 10-15 times more expensive than hers.
Therefore, even if you wanted to exchange for death points, 10,000 death points in the academy cost 100,000 relic coins! Most people wouldn't even dream of having this sort of money. This is why everyone was doing their best to grind for death points and increase their strength and cell activation.
I Regenerate 10,000 Times Faster
Fantasy · RagingArtPunk
He gained nothing from this deal except a little more exp. For someone so 'old and wise' he's extremely stupid. This past life troupe is only making the story worse. Especially, since the MC is not living up to expectations the readers have of someone who supposedly experienced so much in life. He is just as immature as the other students.
ch 27 Fine...
I Regenerate 10,000 Times Faster
Fantasy · RagingArtPunk
I'm a bit a confused....Why does he still need to sleep?
ch 202 Reconnecting
Blessed by Night
Fantasy · AnathaShesha
Yappari. Dekinai. [img=disgusted]
ch 125 120 & 121. A newborn warlock: His first contract spirit
Vampire God in the Apocalypse
Fantasy · Dexter_Sled_1111
too weak
ch 62 Ahead and Behind
Warlock of War: My Ares System
Fantasy · equuip