000Striker000 - Profile

code name's;1. "Enigma"2. "Anomaly"3."Ouroboros"4."Avatar"5."Shinigami"6."Void"7."Shadow"8."Sentry"9."Loki"10."Mr Nobody"

SAG --> WIS

Rewrite please.(And NO Nerfing this time)

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lol~ the snake-sages explanation is going to confuse the h*ll out of Anko....especially since the one time Anko asked Mizuki who he 'loves' and he said 'kaguya'.......its gonna sound like he was saying he only loves himself....!!🤣😂

I hope after this time-skip training, the MC and Kyouka have gotten a lot stronger.... MC training results: • Massively Increased Stamina • Moderately Increased Base Stats • 3 Mastered Martial Arts • Able to make low-grade 'permanent' cards Kyouka training results: • Mastered a Martial Arts that let her use her 'quirk' more effectively( Ty lee(Chi -Blocking)(ATLA) + Hinata Hyuga(Gentle fist)(Naruto) + Acupuncture & Pressure points techniques) • able to use 'concentrated sound blasts' from her earphones jacks. • Moderate increase in 'speed' 'agility' 'flexibility' and 'pinpoint accuracy'. • able to use 'Echolocation' at anytime with her quirk. • strengthen her quirk, by lifting weights with them. • Increased 'range' and 'control' of her quirk.

small mistake; 'Jiro' is the family name........"Kyoka"..is her first name....

can the MC create cards that increases the 'Lifespan' of the target...?(for the mother)... Also card ideas he can use on himself everyday: 1. [Talent Upgrade] - Improves a selected 'talent' by 1% per use. 2. [Mind Upgrade] - Improves the "Comprehension" "Memorisation" "Thinking Speed" and "Analysis Ability" of the target by 0.1% per use. 3. [Adaptability Upgrade] - Improves the "Adaptability" of the target by 1% per use. (p.s if used on the same target 10,000 times the target will gain the ability [Adapt & Evolve](Tyrant - akame ga kill)) 4. [Flaws/Redundancies/Impurities Remover] - Removes the "Impurities" "Dead Blood Cells" and Removes the "Flaws" of the target's body by 1% per use. 5. [Stamina/Constitution/Vitality/Lifespan Upgrade] - Improves the "Stamina" "Constitution" "Vitality" and "Lifespan" of the target by 1% per use. (p.s if this card is used on the same target 10,000 times the target will gain the ability [Regeneration Factor](Wolverine - X-Men))

Idea #1 - [Essence of Blank] - whenever he's not 'busy' he can use one of his 'quirk slots' as this power to 'Evolve' his [New Order] to have more 'quirk slots' and be more versatile and less restricted since this gives him 'unlimited potential'. Idea #2 - [One For All] - he can use one of his 'quirk slots' to give himself a "OFA" copy where he can use the 'transfer' aspect of the quirk to transfer it to one of his hairs which he can pluck, then he can use another 'quirk slot' to have a 'Adapt & Evolve'(akame ga kill/Tyrant) quirk so he can use it fully when he Eats the OFA hair. Idea #3 - [Drain Touch] - he can use one of his 'quirk slots' to get a power that let's him 'Drain' and 'transfer' anything of the enemy (Lifespan/Talents/Health/Quirk Energy/Memories/Stats) to either himself or someone else. (P.S. he can use this to offset the side-effects of [One For All] that is its 'Lifespan Reduction' effect.)

why didn't he take the 'research' notes from the scientists guy...? ...or did he get his memories when he killed him...??

Can the MC use his 'Hatsu' to show his memories..? for example: 'Anime' Manga' 'Novels' 'Videos' because I kinda hope the MC shows 'Machi' some examples of 'string users' like..... • Donquixote Doflamingo (One Piece) • Chiyo & Sasori (Naruto Shippuden) • Lubbock (Akame ga kill) • Walter C. Dornez (Hellsing) • Kaori Kanzaki (A Certain Magical Index) • Rui (Demon Slayer) • Kubinashi (Nurarihyon) • Souei (That Time I Got Reincarnated as a Slime)

also why is the MC not taking advantage of the fact that he has "Infinite Magic" to create lots of 'passive support' Magic he can have active at all times....? • Memory Partition(Nasuverse) • Thought Acceleration(Nasuverse) • Wishcraft( Nasuverse Einzbern) • Immortality & Regeneration at the cost of magic(DxD Pheonix Clan) • Passive Danger Senses/Precognition • Passive Peaceful/Trustworthy Aura • Mystic eyes (Nasuverse) • Passive "Path to Victory"(Plot Armour) • Intelligence/Comprehension Boost • Adapt & Evolve (Akame ga kill 'Tyrant') • Inner world/Mindscape/Occlumency • Repair/Fixing Magic(collateral damage caused by other guild members) • Gold/Gems/Treasure/Valuable 'Search' Magic • Luck/Probability Manipulation Magic

Am I the only person who's hopes that the MC creates "Unlimited Blade Works" magic and then copy all of erza's weapons....?

I hated everything in this chapter....😔 reasons: 1. You killed both mothers - killing off the mothers instead of putting them in a 'coma' was a bad idea, in doing so you lost a lot of potential in the story where the MC could have worked hard to 'find' the herb/medicine, 'grow' it in the 'farm' as well as study hard to learn 'alchemy' in order to 'heal' them. 2. The time-skip + coma was too long - the 9 years 'coma' was a bad idea, it shouldn't have been more than 1-3 years for the MC to wake up from his coma with the help of the "farm" awakening. It also cost the MC time he could have had to get closer to 'Ye Zeyun' & 'Xiao Ning'er' and influenced them to like him instead of 'Nie Li'. for example: • they could have explored the forests nearby looking for 'Herbs/Medicine' to cure the poisoned mothers • they could have trained their 'martial arts' and 'Swordsmanship' • they could have been studying together. • or they could just play together. • be her emotional support. 3. he didn't gain anything from the poison induced coma - let's say that the reason he was in a coma was because his growing 'Body' & 'Soul Realm' was adapting and evolving from being exposed to a Strong unique poison(Draconic Tongue Herb) and survived from it, he should at least get: • Poison/Medicine Blood & Body. • Poison/Medicine Attribute Soul Realm. • Poison/Medicine Dragon Soul Form • Poison/Medicine Detection Senses • Enhanced Alchemy Talent (Enhanced Medicinal Ingredients Understanding) • High Poison Immunity

[Yukihira Soma] or [Erina Nakiri]