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Don't worry about it, we all human here. Prefect grammer is an abstract standard anyways.

for the record you have four options to pick from "... is cultivation this easy?" "... cultivation is this easy?" "... was cultivation this easy?" "... cultivation was this easy?" all of them mean something slightly different but, considering the title you probably want to go with the last one.

couple of mistakes I noticed. I'm the title it should be Didn't not Doesn't. "Cultivation was this easy? How come I didn't know?" secondly where Su li says "Err, Sister Lan is cultivation was this easy?" you want to either remove the is or the was. 'is' is present tense and 'was' is past tense. generally speaking you want to keep the same tense through out a sentence.

welcome back and thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter.

welcome back even if it's only for a short while. I'm kinda glad we circled back a bit "su jian"'s storyline, my theory senses are going off non stop.

Not a whole lot but, I think this was a nice frost step back into the series after a short hiatus. That being said don't feel rushed to write more chapters, please take as long as you need. Can't wait to read what happens next.

See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop

See this! I just gifted the story: Potion

good luck on midterms and take the time you need for the chapters. either way woo volume 2.

Can agree, qi is one of the two universal mystical energies. As for your last cheeky comment, consider my interest more peaked than it already was.

A bit of immortal mortal vibes with the cultivation system there. may the author find 'nother more different words that looks like the old words soon.

eccentric master, get. thanks for the chapter.

Finally we can get back down to some brass tax cultivation. I'm excited to learn more about the other world and Su Li's cultivation. It's a good chapter to slip us back into everything.

thanks for the chapter and congrats on a speedy and safe recovery. Nice to see we are back in the game/alt universe. Still the cliffhanger of the last chapter has my curious what's going to happen to Su Li in both worlds.

the story is evolving a mind of its own! Subdue it quick before it goes rouge!!

Thanks for the update even while your not at 100%. All in all, it looks like the pieces are starting to fall into place. Still I'm happy that learning the truth has left me with more questions than answers. Can't wait to see what trials Su Li will face.

it feels like we're about to get some more game time. so exciting.