HiddenOrchid

HiddenOrchid

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2017-10-19 Joined Global
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HiddenOrchid
HiddenOrchid
17 days ago
Posted

Initially there was a lot of promise and the premise was a unique twist on the usual cultivation story. Things were great and I really enjoyed the pacing. Then around the 500 chapter mark the author basically gave up on any reasonable pacing and decided to pad out the word count to an INSANE degree! Between ch.500 - 600 is basically just ONE battle arc! Some chapters are literally just recaps and reminders where nothing happens! It's absurdly maddening! I'm temporarily dropping this at ch.600 and will come back when there's 1000 chapters cuz at this pacing that's only 4 arcs. Author went full-ret*rd just when things were really picking up. Maybe some future reader can tell me when MC actually becomes an immortal because at this rate it might be ch.900. 🤬

HiddenOrchid
HiddenOrchid
28 days ago
Posted

AI generated slop for art and generic plot. Low effort trash! I don't know why they even bother.

HiddenOrchid
HiddenOrchid
3 months ago
Commented

But didn't she say earlier that there were no large bodies of water in her world? 🤨

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Fantasy · Maestrofunzi_07

HiddenOrchid
HiddenOrchid
3 months ago
Commented

Otherworldly creatures? Fine .But a random axe on the beach!? That's just unbelievable! 🫤

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Fantasy · Maestrofunzi_07

HiddenOrchid
HiddenOrchid
3 months ago
Commented

Uh-oh.

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Fantasy · Maestrofunzi_07

HiddenOrchid
HiddenOrchid
3 months ago
Commented

Arya is a transmigrated soul while her body is still human. Her hypothetical children should logically be human as any other, but who knows if a strange soul can alter DNA? 🧬🤔

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Fantasy · Maestrofunzi_07

HiddenOrchid
HiddenOrchid
3 months ago
Commented

It is interesting that such an assassin group hasn't been out-competed by similar assassin groups that are more practical. Like imagine an assassin similar in skill to the MC but willing to use any weapon or means to get the job done, because dead is dead and a job is a job.

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Fantasy · Maestrofunzi_07

HiddenOrchid
HiddenOrchid
3 months ago
Commented

Weird assassin group but ok. I guess not everyone needs to be like Agent 47.

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Fantasy · Maestrofunzi_07

HiddenOrchid
HiddenOrchid
3 months ago
Commented

This line threw me off quite a bit. Seems like something an AI might say cuz no one talks about their own car like this.

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Fantasy · Maestrofunzi_07

HiddenOrchid
HiddenOrchid
3 months ago
Commented

Grabbin' dem tiddies! ☺️

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Games · A Little White Snake