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Your story is pretty good, I would recommend downloading Grammarly for the main PC you type and edit on. It'll help you catch some of your mistakes. You can delete this comment after you read it. I put it in the paragraph comments so it isn't plastered everywhere. I saw your post on the forums asking for a honest review and help with anything we see in your work. Another thing would be to split up the conversations between different characters into separate paragraphs. It's a webnovel and people are used to have one line paragraphs. It makes it easier to read the dialogue between your characters. The dialogue is very well done and when read aloud, sounds like an actual conversation that can happen amongst friends.

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