"I'll make you an offer you can't refuse."
ch 768 Daoist Eternal Weapon
Fantasy · rRandom
dudes stats are around what a traditional level 30 would have based off math. He could have no class and would still be overpowered. nobody else has the power to increase stats except by leveling. At this point MC is God as they're only 1 year into the apocalypse and it's doubtful anyone is capable of grinding that much exp since highest grade was an "A" in history and only 1 skill per person. MC is basically 20 people in 1 at this point. Give him healing so he can solo the entire world and call it a day
ch 18 Class Certificate, Complete the Transition to a Hidden Class!
Fantasy · Light Tower Ascension
Wasn't it stated after 7 days the people who couldn't enter tower level 2 would be sent out? What would the point of sending people into the towers if the chance of leaving is less than 90%? Also, dudes stats are like a level 20 person but are only "slightly" higher than a normal level 3. The stats and levels don't seem to be fleshed out properly .
ch 14 Beast Tide Comes, Fortunes and Risks Come Hand in Hand!
Fantasy · Light Tower Ascension
Yeah, its almost like people don't read your story. He had a 20% buff from the title and literally doubled his strength stat when he 1 shot the one 3rd order. Then you explain how he destoryed a City fighting the other 3rd order that's almost the size of a country. If Bai isn't holding back the bridge literally is destroyed by a casual swing in the wrong direction
ch 532 Entering into an alliance with the mermaid princess Xian Mei'er
Fantasy · XIETIAN
She meant she had the power to end him at anytime. Also, a message to Bai that the base isn't full of weaklings
ch 401 Clever and witty Shen Mei (Part 1)
Fantasy · XIETIAN
Was expecting you to have him follow all of the paths for a moment.
ch 0 2 Lord of Stars
Fantasy · Rathowm
Your story is pretty good, I would recommend downloading Grammarly for the main PC you type and edit on. It'll help you catch some of your mistakes. You can delete this comment after you read it. I put it in the paragraph comments so it isn't plastered everywhere. I saw your post on the forums asking for a honest review and help with anything we see in your work. Another thing would be to split up the conversations between different characters into separate paragraphs. It's a webnovel and people are used to have one line paragraphs. It makes it easier to read the dialogue between your characters. The dialogue is very well done and when read aloud, sounds like an actual conversation that can happen amongst friends.
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Teen · AlixGHF
Haha I can prob do a chapter for you. Glad you're enjoying the novel!
ch 16 [Bonus] The Seventh
Fantasy · Aucheras
What kind of combat would you like Nathan to use?
ch 15 First Blood
Fantasy · Aucheras
A magician never tells ;). Appreciate your support! Glad you're enjoying it.
ch 13 You're All Going to Die
Fantasy · Aucheras
Thanks. Cool for you to give the perspective of what the Death Eaters are feeling with the return of the mark.
ch 134 August 25, 1994: As The Night Sets
Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader
I hope you don't believe your aquatic vault arc was boring or too descriptive/narrative. I felt it was well fleshed out and showcased Quinn's progression in magical learning. I was able to read it from beginning to end and not as you released it. Maybe that's why people complained? Don't let people's comments derail your vision of developing a beautiful story. Not every chapter has to be action packed .You're story is well developed and a joy to read. Keep up the good work!
ch 123 Mastering Apparition, Plans, and Dreams
Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader
shout out to other webnovels. A true transmigrator.
ch 0 2 I Have Great Expectations For You
Eastern · Do You Eat Cabbage?
It will be amazing when we finally get the reveal of who Lilith is truly and her relationship with Sirius
ch 1082 Sacrificial Love & Possessive Love (Part 1/2)
Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
Fantasy · XIETIAN