Webnovel Author: Claudistopod

Claudistopod

3yr

Replied to Goner_Unravel

Thank you so much, if you have any feedback for me. Do comment on the novel or discord! :D

ch 0 1 Reincarnation

Living in the Zombie Apocalypse with a Shopping System

Sci-fi · Claudistopod

Claudistopod

3yr

Posted

This isekai story is interesting as you read further on. The MC is confused at the beginning, not the typical absorbing memory from the previous body cliche, and the MC also questioning his modern morals to the past era where carnage and chaos littered the street. There are mistakes here and there, but who didn't do any mistakes in webnovel? But the mistakes are getting less and less as the author progress through the chapters. Overall, it is a nice book to read if you like war, MC using his wits, and scheme.

Lost in the 1st Millenium AD

Fantasy · Ritankar_Sarkar_

Claudistopod

3yr

Commented

maybe the Man and the Ground shouldn't be caps and the hypens is a bit too much I think..

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Lost in the 1st Millenium AD

Fantasy · Ritankar_Sarkar_

Claudistopod

3yr

Replied to Claudistopod

except if Yiyi face already has blood in it

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Lost in the 1st Millenium AD

Fantasy · Ritankar_Sarkar_

Claudistopod

3yr

Commented

Maybe you can search for another word to describe Yiyi as I don't know how to imagine 'bloodying'

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Lost in the 1st Millenium AD

Fantasy · Ritankar_Sarkar_

Claudistopod

3yr

Commented

Wasn't

-But, this was'nt the only reason!

Lost in the 1st Millenium AD

Fantasy · Ritankar_Sarkar_

Claudistopod

3yr

Commented

It a great beginning, an intriguing one where the reader wants to learn more about the future happening.

ch 0 1 "Where am I?"

Lost in the 1st Millenium AD

Fantasy · Ritankar_Sarkar_

Claudistopod

3yr

Commented

in his what? lmao dont leave cliff hangers in this kinda conversation dude, you're just too much hahha

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The Destruction Of Balance

Fantasy · Xyenox_chip

Claudistopod

3yr

Replied to Addictions

I'm preparing it in the 20+ chapters range, but it can also shorter. Sorry if it took longer, as I have to work, handle my business, and also writing my thesis, right now I barely had a good sleep. Anyway, do be patient with the story as I too want some action :D

ch 0 7 Buying a Factory