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- grammar is pretty bad - simple spelling mistakes that should have been caught by spellcheck are ignored and not fixed - "push ups for arm strengthening and sit ups for leg strengthening"

honestly, only 28 chapters in but the quality of this fanfic is way above others. the characters don't suddenly become cringe or change immensely half way through like in other fanfics. The chapters are packed and super long so even though there are only 70-80 chapters, it's probably be the equivalent of 200-300 of another story. Truly, a great story.

The story seems fine so far (I'm only on chapter 59 at the moment though), but I HAD to write this review. There are so many inconsistencies with skills and random facts. There are moments when he can use skills with a long cooldown almost instantly. His enraged slash skill (that can only be used to kill monsters at the same level) has been used to kill monsters above his level too. I'm not sure if there will be some huge reveal that explains why this is allowed later but as a reader getting through the chapters, it just feels like the author doesn't even remember their own material at times (specifically with the game skills). I don't know how the UI works on this site, but if there are actual mistakes, the author should fix them and rewrite parts of the story so that it's consistent. A story with such a high rating shouldn't have so many mistakes in it. I can't rate the stability of updates, character design, or world background since I'm not that far in the story yet but... writing quality is a 3/5 since the grammar isn't atrocious like some other fan novels but those inconsistencies stand out a lot.