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Tbh these 4 are more than enough, any more girls and you will have to sacrifice story progression just so you can write mc interacting with all of them in any meaningful way, giving him harem any higher than this would be shoting yourself in the foot and making writing harder than it has to be.

Not to mention that there is a bet going on that if lost, would result with his goddess suffering terrible fate, so him playing around like that is double stupid. His idiotic stunt is putting other person at risk and makes me actually dislike this mc.

Ugh, first the azula kiss and now this? I really hate the whole fate thing in fiction, couldn't the story of avatar be just people making their own choices rather than some preordained fate? Yeah, after so many chapters i think this novel isn't really for me, while the whole story is pretty nice there is just too much little things like this that just lower my enjoyment, and seeing that you are 20+ chapters in patreon there is no chance for you to really change anything so really no point in complaining. I don't remember all the things but i would like to atleast say what i tought was unnecessary in the story: 1. The mc being retard putting all his points in the luck, and you later writing it in such a way with the evil lady so the luck actually does anything with this destiny manipulation (which i am sure gamer luck doesn't work like that) 2. Mc being absolute psycho to the fox spirit for no reason 3. Mc being idiot and jumping spirits so much stronger than him and almost dying two times where it was completly unnecessary. 4. Azula kiss also was put in the story for no reason. 5. Dimensional chat is also unnecessary and i think story would be much better if it just was gamer system in Avatar 6. The whole fate thing also is completly unnecessary in my opinion. Anyway i wish you good luck in writing this novel.

While i don't mind cold calculating mc, i hope the author will not go with full retard cruel evil mc or emotionless robot, they get boring super fast.

This whole thing is completly unnecessary, not only the whole camera thing is just plot, he just ended first year at hogwarts, you should focus on school, his studies, relationships and growth, all other plot needs to wait atleast until he is in 3 or 4 year in hogwarts.

While i agree with you on the power system, there is one possible explanation. Before events of the show most of the main shinigami cast only trained in relative peace, and killed some low level hollows, only when show started they had almost non-stop life threatening battles, so maybe the pressure from constant combat pushed the cast to improve at accelerated pace.

Right? But i guess when you want to create big harem in a verse like this, you have to make characters act ooc to even make this work, dissapointing but to be expected from webnovel fanfiction. :/ Well i will stick around to see how it turns out in the end but i'm not holding my hopes for reasonable harem.

I really think you should keep harem at max 3 or 4 women, 99% of harems bigger than this just ruin the story.