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hope author makes Bam stronger than the original/canon. I mean Lumen is already pretty op and doesn't have much challenge nowadays so its kinda nice if bam could keep up with him (even if barely) and gave lumen quite some fights View More
Devil Fruit Powers in The Tower of God · C57
1 day ago

Zerak: Some people are better at improving things and automising them than making new things.

This why you have editors and publishers helping authors improve their work instead of writing their own work.

I have yet to read you work yet so I can’t really comment on that though. I’ll drop you a review once I read enough of it to feel like i know how to rate it and what to point out about it.

It seems like an interesting story though from the reviews I have read.

Reborn As Harry Osborn - Marvel
1 week ago

Fatty_Cream: That was kind of a scummy thing to do, i mean criticism can be seen as an attack on your character, but it really shouldn't. Usually, it's with the intent of trying to improve someone else craft as people do not see flaws within their own works as easily as other people do. Perhaps it wasn't what you meant but your response came off as defensive, the friendly response then resorting to not so subtly shutting down his criticism with if he had written before. No his criticism still stands and i think it encapsulated some problems i found even before reading, which was the synopsis. The synopsis needs to be edited, as even though i could understand the gist, it didn't flow at all and i had to put it together with the shambles of broken grammar strewn.

Anyways this concept you came up with is quite neat, but the quality leaves much to be desired. I hope you improve!

Reborn As Harry Osborn - Marvel
1 week ago

void893: As a reader these are the reviews I want to see. It clearly outlines issues and good parts. Thank you!
I hope the author really takes in your advice.

Reborn As Harry Osborn - Marvel
1 week ago
I totally agree with this. This could have been a dozen times better if its slower with more development instead of jetpacking his way over everything. Also about the characters being bland is pretty spot on. Imo all characters in here is pretty much categorized as being a horny chicks, horny dudes or a yes man boys/girls. Everyone just practically thinking of horny or isn't thinking at all View More

Saadido: This is gonna be a harsh review as this fiction has potential.

Let's just start by saying, the author only has determination and a cool idea going for him currently.

The writing quality is non existent. Huge blocks of text with non capitalized "I"s, but the worst part is that it reads like a stale cracker, dry.
The author tells you what is happening with no context, emotions or humanity.

Stability of updates I have no complaints with.

Story development is way too fast paced. The characters have no time to develop.

Which brings us to Character design. It's simply non existent.

World background is not explained mentioned or touched upon.

Overall a waste of time currently but with hopes of improvement.

To the author: read a novel then write a novel. Don't watch a movie and try to type one down. Assume the reader knows nothing and try to bring them into your world.

Good luck.

Reborn As Harry Osborn - Marvel
1 week ago

Saadido: This is gonna be a harsh review as this fiction has potential.

Let's just start by saying, the author only has determination and a cool idea going for him currently.

The writing quality is non existent. Huge blocks of text with non capitalized "I"s, but the worst part is that it reads like a stale cracker, dry.
The author tells you what is happening with no context, emotions or humanity.

Stability of updates I have no complaints with.

Story development is way too fast paced. The characters have no time to develop.

Which brings us to Character design. It's simply non existent.

World background is not explained mentioned or touched upon.

Overall a waste of time currently but with hopes of improvement.

To the author: read a novel then write a novel. Don't watch a movie and try to type one down. Assume the reader knows nothing and try to bring them into your world.

Good luck.

Reborn As Harry Osborn - Marvel
1 week ago
Messy as f*** View More
Reborn as Naruto's Twin Brother · C38
3 weeks ago
Its pretty sad how author barely read comments and just keep forcing the mc into a sexual relationship every possible route/scenario there is. And this problem is existing in all his other novels. Meh can't really complain cause his updating all his novel daily and just forced our self to read hoping for a better plot View More
Sis-Con with Dimensional Chat Group · C301
3 weeks ago

bottle5: Its just too forced.

Sis-Con with Dimensional Chat Group · C301
3 weeks ago
Wish i could thumbd up this for a 1000 more times.. View More

NEETGod: *Disappointed sigh*

Sis-Con with Dimensional Chat Group · C301
3 weeks ago

NEETGod: *Disappointed sigh*

Sis-Con with Dimensional Chat Group · C301
3 weeks ago

Banana_Bomb: its mind boggling how "kind" the MC being enslaved, no shred of pride, no shred of anger, not even showing a bit of headache, "its driving me crazy" aint gonna be enough to show he has a headache and uncomfortable with the situation.

"oh im a slave now, cool, lets roll with it like its nothing, I'll be cooking making beds, wiping windows, bossed around, it driving me crazy but im KIND"
if its a plot to get her into the harem, its really a poor excuse and poorly executed.

rushing earlier then what? going to slowly crawl with filler with "slave tag" to prolong the arc and introduce us to a new harem member?

by far the weakest early plot for an arc/ mini arc

Sis-Con with Dimensional Chat Group · C298
3 weeks ago

SaintViking21: I agree 100%. It had potential in the beginning but the mc characteristic and the inconsistency just ruined it for me.

Dragonborn Saga
1 month ago
It's pretty disturbing how a guy living in a peaceful era could just go and wish to be reborn on a world where human life is equivalent to an ant. Haven't read mga for a while but i do know that mga is one hell of a bloody, face slapping, revenge fights and murderous webnovel View More
Heavenly Martial God Asura · C1
1 month ago
I support you! 👍 View More

JAsura: Thanks for your comment first, now let me tell you my reasons for my decision to not give him One For All.

First, I know that my MC is the protagonist of my story, but I also don‘t want to exclude Midoriya from the WHOLE story. Rest assured, MC will be the main focus of the story while Midoriya will just be another side character like Bakugo and the others. I‘m aware that many people don‘t like Midoriya, but I personally don‘t feel that way. I don’t hate Midoriya. Sure, his wimpy nature is sometimes a bit annoying, but what do you expect from a Shounen Manga, right?

And the second reason, and also probably the more important one, is balance. If I just give the MC One For All, I wouldn’t be able to enjoy the future endeavors I have in mind for the MC. If he gets OFA, additionally to his Saiyan powers, he would probably be almost invincible in this world already. Due to his incredible physical capability, MC would be able to use 100% of OFA from the get-go. Even All Might could do it from the start, so naturally MC would be able to do it, too, as a Saiyan.

Many of you will probably think ‘But isn’t it good for him when he goes to another world?’, and the answer is no. Why? Because the idea of going to another world is still rather far away at this time. As the title of this fanfic says, it’s a My Hero Academia fanfic. I really want to explore this whole world with my MC and execute many ideas I have in my mind. This means that for those who expect the MC to go to another world soon, I must unfortunately disappoint you..

I hope these reasons could someway or another satisfy you🧐

My Hero Academia - Saiyaman · C13
1 month ago

JAsura: Thanks for your comment first, now let me tell you my reasons for my decision to not give him One For All.

First, I know that my MC is the protagonist of my story, but I also don‘t want to exclude Midoriya from the WHOLE story. Rest assured, MC will be the main focus of the story while Midoriya will just be another side character like Bakugo and the others. I‘m aware that many people don‘t like Midoriya, but I personally don‘t feel that way. I don’t hate Midoriya. Sure, his wimpy nature is sometimes a bit annoying, but what do you expect from a Shounen Manga, right?

And the second reason, and also probably the more important one, is balance. If I just give the MC One For All, I wouldn’t be able to enjoy the future endeavors I have in mind for the MC. If he gets OFA, additionally to his Saiyan powers, he would probably be almost invincible in this world already. Due to his incredible physical capability, MC would be able to use 100% of OFA from the get-go. Even All Might could do it from the start, so naturally MC would be able to do it, too, as a Saiyan.

Many of you will probably think ‘But isn’t it good for him when he goes to another world?’, and the answer is no. Why? Because the idea of going to another world is still rather far away at this time. As the title of this fanfic says, it’s a My Hero Academia fanfic. I really want to explore this whole world with my MC and execute many ideas I have in my mind. This means that for those who expect the MC to go to another world soon, I must unfortunately disappoint you..

I hope these reasons could someway or another satisfy you🧐

My Hero Academia - Saiyaman · C13
1 month ago
I want more 👍👍 liking it more compared to jurassic Hero View More
I Am The Lion, I Am The Sunshine (A My Hero Academia & 7 Deadly Sins Fan fiction) · C20
1 month ago

ericm160: But everything changed when the fire mage attacked

Dragonborn Saga · C95
1 month ago

TypeFantasyHeart: And this was the tragedy for the poor orcs that were living without bothering no one and teaching their children how to hunt in the safety of their home, but all changed when the evil barbarian mage came, everyone was killed without mercy and the undead showed no pity in killing childs under the orders of the evil.... sad

Dragonborn Saga · C95
1 month ago
Fight fire with fire. Only a bigger yandere can subdue another yandere.. Zen View More
Dragonborn Saga · C55
1 month ago
Reading Status: C47
Good? And probably one of the best fanfic in this site. But...

Still at chapter 40 and despite how much author keeps saying stuff about immersion. I can't really immersed in it.

This novel kinda really reminds me of the novel "The experimental log of the crazy lich". Both have lots of info dumping, heavy plot, out of place comedies and somewhat mentally illed mc and characters. Which imo is kind of good but really hard to bing read. I dunno bout others but reading heavy serious plotted novel but suddenly went comedy most of the time is kinda headache inducing. And in this novel, i don't like the fact that the mc's perspective is on 1st person point of view. Hard to appreciate the heavy plots when the mc's mind feel so jumbled and keep jumping everywhere and here we are reader looking at in 1st person pov. Serious situation are always dumped by a funny mood that always came out of nowhere. And comedy can came in random places cause the character introduced are also a bit retard and have messy personalities. I mean i don't really see any normal people in the mc's circle. His friend are children so personality is fairly innocent and normal but gets weird sometimes, adopted mother won't publicly show any care to the mc and most of the time humiliate him, Crazy maid, nowhere to be found mom, random aunt, always mad antagonist, serious and a bit wacked underworld people etc etc.

TLDR.. It has a serious and heavy plot but the comedy overshadow it. It's a good read but ain't really that fun to read. There's a lot of fanfic in this websites that's very fun to read but only overshadowed by this cause of its neat grammar and writing, and those novel's poor slow updates. This the kind of novel that a has to be read slowly while tolerating the mc jumping pov instead of bing reading it in turn. View More
Dragonborn Saga
1 month ago

Shinkaio: If he is anger that easily he will not last long, he use a killer move at the beginning just because anger...It's like you make gai use the 7th gate vs small shrimp at the beginning of a war

The Pirate Djinn · C11
1 month ago
I doubt author ever read our comments to see our opinions.. View More
Jurassic Hero (Boku no Hero Academia Fanfic). · C115
1 month ago
I think todoroki considered himself as person who have 2 quirks. As seen in BNHA manga chapter 217 page 7 after the conclusion of the class joint training exercise and the reveal of deku's 2nd awaken quirk the black whip. Todoroki confront midoriya and stated "You also have two quirks" which midoriya respond by saying that todoroki misunderstood and that his black whip was a sort of extension of his original quirk. Which is kinda half-truth. View More

Cracker7: God story! The Quirk is inspired on Mochi Mochi no Mi? It's a god power but it's have to be complement with busoushoku (In my opinion).
PD: A person with two quirks don't exist (All for One had one and absorve the others).

Jurassic Hero (Boku no Hero Academia Fanfic).
1 month ago
I think todoroki considered himself as person who have 2 quirks. As seen in BNHA manga chapter 217 page 7 after the conclusion of the class joint training exercise and the reveal of deku's 2nd awaken quirk the black whip. Todoroki confront midoriya and stated "You also have two quirks" which midoriya respond by saying that todoroki misunderstood and that his black whip was a sort of extension of his original quirk. Which is kinda half-truth. View More

Cracker7: God story! The Quirk is inspired on Mochi Mochi no Mi? It's a god power but it's have to be complement with busoushoku (In my opinion).
PD: A person with two quirks don't exist (All for One had one and absorve the others).

Jurassic Hero (Boku no Hero Academia Fanfic).
1 month ago
I think todoroki considered himself as person who have 2 quirks. As seen in BNHA manga chapter 217 page 7 after the conclusion of the class joint training exercise and the reveal of deku's 2nd awaken quirk the black whip. Todoroki confront midoriya and stated "You also have two quirks" which midoriya respond by saying that todoroki misunderstood and that his black whip was a sort of extension of his original quirk. Which is kinda half-truth. View More

Cracker7: God story! The Quirk is inspired on Mochi Mochi no Mi? It's a god power but it's have to be complement with busoushoku (In my opinion).
PD: A person with two quirks don't exist (All for One had one and absorve the others).

Jurassic Hero (Boku no Hero Academia Fanfic).
1 month ago
I think todoroki considered himself as person who have 2 quirks. As seen in BNHA manga chapter 217 page 7 after the conclusion of the class joint training exercise and the reveal of deku's 2nd awaken quirk the black whip. Todoroki confront midoriya and stated "You also have two quirks" which midoriya respond by saying that todoroki misunderstood and that his black whip was a sort of extension of his original quirk. Which is kinda half-truth. View More

Cracker7: God story! The Quirk is inspired on Mochi Mochi no Mi? It's a god power but it's have to be complement with busoushoku (In my opinion).
PD: A person with two quirks don't exist (All for One had one and absorve the others).

Jurassic Hero (Boku no Hero Academia Fanfic).
1 month ago
I think todoroki considered himself as person who have 2 quirks. As seen in BNHA manga chapter 217 page 7 after the conclusion of the class joint training exercise and the reveal of deku's 2nd awaken quirk the black whip. Todoroki confront midoriya and stated "You also have two quirks" which midoriya respond by saying that todoroki misunderstood and that his black whip was a sort of extension of his original quirk. Which is kinda half-truth. View More

Cracker7: God story! The Quirk is inspired on Mochi Mochi no Mi? It's a god power but it's have to be complement with busoushoku (In my opinion).
PD: A person with two quirks don't exist (All for One had one and absorve the others).

Jurassic Hero (Boku no Hero Academia Fanfic).
1 month ago
I think todoroki considered himself as person who have 2 quirks. As seen in BNHA manga chapter 217 page 7 after the conclusion of the class joint training exercise and the reveal of deku's 2nd awaken quirk the black whip. Todoroki confront midoriya and stated "You also have two quirks" which midoriya respond by saying that todoroki misunderstood and that his black whip was a sort of extension of his original quirk. Which is kinda half-truth. View More

Cracker7: God story! The Quirk is inspired on Mochi Mochi no Mi? It's a god power but it's have to be complement with busoushoku (In my opinion).
PD: A person with two quirks don't exist (All for One had one and absorve the others).

Jurassic Hero (Boku no Hero Academia Fanfic).
1 month ago
Jurassic Hero - Primal! View More
Jurassic Hero (Boku no Hero Academia Fanfic). · C114
1 month ago
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