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This chapter was a pretty pointless filler, its already established he has smut of all characters who have the diary. There is no point randomly describing one, even if this will affect the story the same could have been achieved with like 2 lines telling the reader Hancock is reading Arton's work about her.

The mc would be running on an infinite money cheat pretty much. And with the system it would also translate to xp and power.

Meanwhile its logical from a story standpoint it could get awkward. Rias is filthy rich, that means the mc will have access to unlimited resources with the exception of extremely rare stuff owned by only gods and such. Rias also dotes on her peerage (and the Gremory family too) which means they would also hand out everything for free to him especially since they would benefit from the end products. And considering how highly valued something like healing potions or fertility potions would be, the devils throttling him for money would be very unrealistic if he ever joined.

The overall story is really great but all the lewd scenes and filler together stretch it too much.

I'm not trying to bash the MC but he should really accept whatever those pheromones do are a form of mind control, just a really hard to detect one. Its not even subtle considering he practically "marry" a women every day, usually only in a few hours of interaction. I could even accept the first case with Rias who was in an emotional turmoil to get attached to some sort of love at first sight, but with Sona going into the conversation with "It's impossible an entire peerage married you without mind control in like a week" an then proceeds to marry him herself after a few hours is just insane and straight up impossible without affecting her mind and free will. His pheromones are practically drugging every girl he wants with some sort of love potion effect, which is just mind control via chemicals.

Considering his previous life experiences the mc is pretty gullible/naive. Considering he is also knowledgeable with the HP universe he should know its pretty easy to check the wand's usage history, read memories, etc... Overall its much harder to get away with crimes when magic involved. He is taking far too much risk for what can be considered pocket money. He could simply wait to get into Hogwarts and repair/grab all the junk in the Room of Requirements to make much more he could ever peddle as kid on carpet repairing watches and cauldrons. I'm pretty sure he could make more by going to a mundane junkyard/pawn shop, buying broken stuff legally and repair them, considering how proud his mom were I'm pretty sure she would even help. Getting into the entire swapping parts in stuff and making a cut on the stolen parts is just far too much risk for barely any money considering they also have to spend on fake parts.

Can he downcast cursed flames on a lower level? In its current form I'm pretty sure its not worth to spend 3.2 times energy for 1.6 times damage even with the extra "debuff" chance and bounce.

I quite like the story but in my opinion there is a little bit too much "banter", most of the chapter felt like a strange slapstick comedy episode which is kind of out of place, especially with the topic being pretty serious. If that's what you are going for then I guess its fine, but I'm getting that "I'm so random" vibe too much for my taste.

This might be the most convenient reason for a harem I have ever read which is both amusing and impressive.

Its nice to see Einlion having fun writing. I might be wrong but I didn't feel this much enthusiasm in the writing since the Danmachi times of EPIC. The content is always quality but in the last few days I get that "Plus Ultra" vibes.

You could just prep and always have an extra chapter in reserve. That way you can just post whenever its optimal without these notifications and such.... Its really disappointing to get these "notifications" and webnovel's system also suck at handling deleted chapters, often messing up my library.

I still like the story but waiting until the "wizarding world" arc is done and reading it in one go starting to look more appealing with every chapter. The arc started 2 month ago and chapter wise its almost the half of the entire story at this point but the happenings could be summed up in like 2-3 chapters.

Even if there is a skip, it should really count for the training from Mirko and such. A lot of "system" novels forget to calculate their leveling speed into timeskips.... like getting a few level on most of his skills daily , then after a 2 month timeskip he is only 2 level higher making it feel like the mc literally slept for 2 months.

That quest changed a lot over the chapters ... it feels kinda strange