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*starting mechanism and *within
"They filled the insides of the bridge with explosive tags, one of those strings was the starting the mechanism, a trap with in a trap!"
Konoha: The Template System
Anime & Comics · Tobi_444
should have a comma after "bridge" and "cutting" should be changed to "cut"
Slowly the squad moved towards the bridge and upon reaching carefully cutting the strings under the lead of Orochimaru.
Konoha: The Template System
Anime & Comics · Tobi_444
also, is there "a total of 8 Shinobi" or "around 8 Shinobi."? you could also change it to "A total of around 8 Shinobi" which would be grammatically correct, but it would be odd to use it in this context.
Moving a branch of tree away, Orochimaru peeked towards the bridge with his snake like eyes, next to him sat around a total of eight shinobi.
Konoha: The Template System
Anime & Comics · Tobi_444
*tree branch
Moving a branch of tree away, Orochimaru peeked towards the bridge with his snake like eyes, next to him sat around a total of eight shinobi.
Konoha: The Template System
Anime & Comics · Tobi_444
should either be "A large crowd was gathering at the green entrance gate of the village" or just remove the word "quite".
At the huge green entrance gate of the village quite a crowd was gathered, most of them genin, then chunin and finally the jonin.
Konoha: The Template System
Anime & Comics · Tobi_444
the 15 to 80km is the distance to sense flying thunder god marks. the 4.5 to 12km is his Space-time sensing field he can use to find the presence of Chakra signatures but not any details like strength or identity. the 3.5km is his Chakra field sensing which can detect strength, identity, etc
During the 3 months of training, Fujin's range of detection had increased from 15 kilometers to 80 kilometers. His Space-Time Sensing Technique's range had also increased from 4.5 kilometers to 12 kilometers. As such, it was far superior to Fujin's chakra field. Regardless, for the time being, Fujin wouldn't be able to detect the location of the seal if it went off in the Land of Rivers while he was in Konoha.
Naruto : The Wind Calamity
Fantasy · Devil_Hex
Ideas kept pouring into Naruto's mind as he comprehended Fujin's words. A mischievous grin appeared on his face as well. He exclaimed in a goofy tone, "Oh boy! I can think of so many pranks with this jutsu! Hehehehe! Iruka sensei is going to hate me."
Naruto : The Wind Calamity
Fantasy · Devil_Hex
*subdao even the heavens are getting involved in the Sun vs Dub war.
The second thing he noticed was the drastic increase in one of his Soul Dubdao. It increased from 7% Grand Dao Source to 30% Grand Dao Source, almost as good as his Fate Dao.
Journey of the Fate Destroying Emperor
Eastern · LazySageDao
who is this?
"You should have already guessed," Chen Tong replied calmly. "So, let's skip the introduction. I'm here because I'm interested in why you went to this extreme length to manipulate that monkey."
Journey of the Fate Destroying Emperor
Eastern · LazySageDao
it just ate a bit too much mexican food when it saw the golden age ending.
The gas giant now merely a rotten husk of its former self, noxious fumes lingered on its surface, its skies ruled by bellowing thunder and fierce winds.
Destiny: The Legendary Hunter
Video Games · Writers_Ablood
The years spent in the Dream World to increase his battle experience activated, and he realized his gluteus maximus muscles were still working, so he farted. However, this was not just a normal fart, but a fart backed by an infinite amount of mass from Mu Lei's true body.
Journey of the Fate Destroying Emperor
Eastern · LazySageDao
I raise an eyebrow in the general direction of the shrine of Molag Bal, staring directly into the source of the Daedra's presence... and simply ask "Bitch, do you have any idea who I am?" The sheer arrogance of my question is so potent that it leaves the so called King of Rape speechless for nearly a minute, utterly humiliating the disgusting creature in the process.
Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale
Video Games · Rastislav
I'm waiting for the two of them to just be locked in a room together to finally get over all the URT. Or maybe a tomb or cave, anything works.
'And of course she sensed that' I offer her a strained smile as she stares at me, seemingly having read my thoughts in an instant 'Women...'
Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale
Video Games · Rastislav
how does the MC's system actually work again? is it mainly just a visual measurement of his skills as well as the occasional perk or ability he gets by completing certain tasks?
The fact that using such a spell would push me into low mastery of alteration went unsaid.
Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale
Video Games · Rastislav
"Corpses it is!" The ancient vampire interrupts with almost lively enthusiasm.
Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale
Video Games · Rastislav
"Cute?" I mutter and with a forceful twist of my arm I launch my sword at her, immediately impaling her to the wall, her mouth opens in a silent cream as my sword scalds her very soul, but I have more important things to worry about as I glare at her "Bitch, I am adorable."
Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale
Video Games · Rastislav
they gonna die.
My Magicka surges around me in full force, my aura turning visible to the naked eye showing all of them just how fucked they were "You see, little farm tool, there is no longer any need to wonder where your god is." The smile behind my mask is all teeth "Because he is right here... and he is fresh out of mercy."
Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale
Video Games · Rastislav
Reyvin "Please dispose of this Silver for me, perhaps it could be used to stab things by the plebeians of your order"
As I turn to leave I suddenly remember something and pull out a tome "Oh and here is everything I could gather about the Volkihar with my personal notes." I toss it at him and he seems genuinely grateful... Then I unload about a hundred silver ingots on his floor "And here is something for a good old stabbing... Enjoy!"
Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale
Video Games · Rastislav
I can definitely believe that this is the entirety of his speech.
It was time to make a speech.
Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale
Video Games · Rastislav