Badges 3
Moments 53
This is some horrible writing bro 😂, how can you break such a serious moment like a fathers death with some sexy time
ch 88 Chapter 87: Sleepover!
Marvel's Black Steel
Movies · Ozonelayer
The plot thickens
ch 42 The first step
Martial Grandmaster in Naruto World
Anime & Comics · readerbecamewriter
The author has gone to the dark side. he is lost
Not gonna lie, I'm kinda getting why authors love doing cliffhangers. It strangely scratches hidden sadistic urges I didn't even know I had. Promise not to abuse it though.
MHA: A Talented Hero
Anime & Comics · Sr_Extremis
I like that you actually show the build up of a relationship and dont just time skip. Great chapter
ch 48 Chapter 48: “Growth and Traditions”
Harry Potter and the Silent Guardian
Book&Literature · TalesByJaz
I do when im passionate, i was really enjoying the story 'till halfway through
ch 60 Chapter 60. The End
Avatar The Last Airbender: Not Avatar
Anime & Comics · Vandalizer
it took al lot of self control to not leave a hate comment, but i hope you can take it easy with the pacing on your next story. Freo had an interesting background and beginning which was ruined by the strange shift in the middle of the story. the ending was also very rushed and the romance crushed. may you fair beter in your next endeavour
ch 60 Chapter 60. The End
Avatar The Last Airbender: Not Avatar
Anime & Comics · Vandalizer
the thing im mad about isnt even him losing, it's the author making him unnecessarly cruel and bloodthirsty since meeting Azula at around chap. 35. Why would he become this dumb, he would have eventually become strong enough with his talent. feels very forced
ch 59 Chapter 59
Avatar The Last Airbender: Not Avatar
Anime & Comics · Vandalizer
i dont understand why he is going so far for azula or the fire nation. In the earlier parts of the story he only massacared because he was attacked and wouldnt needlessly kill just to impress. if he wanted the knowledge of basing se so badly he has more than enough skill to sneak in and steal it. i just dont understand how he went from killing for self defens and revenge to killing for selfish desire(and is helping the fire nation in the process). very weird shift
ch 39 Chapter 39
Avatar The Last Airbender: Not Avatar
Anime & Comics · Vandalizer
i do hope he eventually kills and replaces the governing powers of the fire nation since they are responseble for his family's death. no "i have no enemies"
"I am honored to accept Your invitation to Your home, my Lord!"
Avatar The Last Airbender: Not Avatar
Anime & Comics · Vandalizer
I mean compared to the power levels of the world his rewards arent all that big.
This book has been deleted.
🤣🤣 the author is fighting for his life over the coma plot.
ch 0 8 A DEAL WITH THE RING
Batman x Arc Reactor
Anime & Comics · Xcalibur_Xc
Just a tip: Try to make your Mc struggle a bit more. He already has perfect memory. You can make him work for his skills and control which will show us readers more of his development. Giving so much to him in the beginning already makes it harder to connect to him. Its very hard to write a good/interesting Op Mc so try to delay making him so strong without making it boring.
ch 0 2 Finally Here
Weretiger in Teen Wolf
TV · Subject876
Im sorry but this seems like a nerf to me. Infinite mana and negation of mana/mental energy expenditure are very different things. It feels like the author is bettaying the reader.d maybe vhange the synopsis to avoind this.
ch 0 2 Chapter 02 - System
Danmachi - Infinite Mana System!
Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague
One of the biggest downfall caused by bad romance. The story was good to alright the first 60 chaps. Then it went downhill when the Mc started to date and eventually turns into a fuckfest every other chapter. I would not waste my time on this
Marvel's Black Steel
Movies · Ozonelayer