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Honestly, i am little baffled that this fic have so many bad reviews at top. I've been reading LN(in broad sence)and various fics for almost 10 years. This wn account is more than 6 years old, for example. Overall, im over severall HUNDREDS fully fics and ln's. And in my humble opinion this is one of the best works I've EVER tried. So, 10/10 highly recomemended

one of the best one piece fics out here. not without flaws, but definitely worth reading!

How can this have so many good reviews is a mystery. Mc is cliché Chinese protag, with good ol "my actions didnt make any sense". funny enoygh, backstory is decent, but writing quality is shit. Characters dont act like humans, but Chinese novels characters. Writing quality is simply bad. Character development is nonexistent. Plot progress also dont make any sence, as mc actions, like 1 time he picked a girl lost in the sea. Then she comments actions of the crew like trash Chinese novel. and in the end mc simply threw her (literally) at marine ship because he can.

Overall, this is really good crossover, character development is steady and they are feeling very real. the only real issue that i feel is that author concentrates on psychological problems of said characters TOO MUCH.And with the same pattern for everyone: story progresses, there are some plot/story development BUT out of nowhere there is an issue with the character (with no prior sign of it beforehand) and its suddenly VERY serious abd it need to be resolved or this all doomed! and then to resolve it it ALWAYS need to be with overly complicated or really drastic means, borderline insane and sometimes stupid. and with miracle willpower it all gets resolved. everything okay now!but nooo, then another character get LIFE AND DEATH problem and it needs to be fixed ASAP, just like previous one.okay, most of character resolved their problems and its good now right? and we can finally see some plot deplopement? well yes, for 5-10 chapters. BUT it suddenly reveals that was not all the issues of character been resolved last time (again, out of nowhere, with no prior sigsns). so, cycle repeat itself. It was like that with at least sona, aika, medusa and MC himself for several times. and at least one time for others at main cast. it just get stupidly repetative like cultivation novels, if you know what i mean.but aside for it, ff is really good, even if im not satisfied with amount of romance parts (too litle for me)

shonen genre, not seinen*

well, this fic is very light, slice of life-ish and overal positive, which is good. Mc and others characters decisions are reasonable, MC background is also smartly written along overall plot. Cudos to actually pinpoint how stupid are characters are from naruto world. seriously, in original they were delusional and plain dumb. it was okay when you are teenager but when you have matured, it kinda feels dumb. Well, thats the seinens are, i guess. Now, its time for me to explore granpa universe!

Honestly, I'm amazed by quality of this fic. Characters are not bland and they are, for god sake, GROWING AND DEVELOPING. also, author did a really good job on historical facts on both real world and HP. My personal top3 novel I've ever read, along with release that witch and 3 days of happiness. Im really enjoying this work and after its done I'll go for other works of this author

Marvelous work - interesting and somewhat deep characters, some mystery and great plot. MC reminds me of one in epic of leviathan. Highly recommended to check it out!

honestly, its just trash. writing quality(and the story) is so bad that it looks like autor is 10 years old - it looks like a clind describing his fantasy story from his imagination (in a bad way)