Spenma

1yr

Commented

The mc attitude is a bit weird. It seems like he kinda doesn’t give af. If he doesn’t give af why should we as the readers

ch 0 3 A Blood Feud Already

A Great Sage gave me a System

Eastern · Yozuka

Spenma

2yr

Posted

Its an average novel. Minir grammar errors. It is a bit odd how the MC is unfazed withhis transmigration. The characters are cheery and helpful even though they also got transmigrated, and stuck in a completely new world. Just feels really off with the character development. Mc has no awareness or caution at all. Up to you if you wanna continue but im dropping.

Reincarnated With A Summoning System

Fantasy · Aoki_Aku

Spenma

2yr

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

ch 0 1 Prologue

The Ruined Death Knight

Fantasy · Allenheim

Spenma

2yr

Posted

Its honesty okay, and just that its okay. The paragraphs are a bIt too long so its a mouthful to read that big chunk of text. The character interactIons are a bIt rough. I’d say give it a try as it could be good but it was hard for me to read. Best of luck author!

My life as a reborn monster

Fantasy · Forsakenneel

Spenma

2yr

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

ch 72 Do Not Try This At Home

The Good Teacher

Fantasy · Junior_Sundar

Spenma

2yr

Commented

Heh…author is in the rabbit hole too

ch 0 8 Noble Hunting

I Became a System

Fantasy · yohananmikhael

Spenma

2yr

Commented

Im liking this book 😁. its dEveloping really smoothly and everything seems natiral. keep up the good work

ch 14 Where is the monsters' home, Ma'am? (2)

My Parasite Skill System

Fantasy · Tomorrowceases

Spenma

2yr

Commented

Book and author writing seems reallY weird. *disgusted* Doesnt really explains things. dropping book

ch 0 7 Chapter 7

Percy Jackson: The God of Magic

Book&Literature · CORNBRINGER

Spenma

2yr

Commented

Sooo…im confused what rules restrict her to not have kidS? The big three pact? Doesnt make sense to me….

ch 0 5 Chapter 5

Percy Jackson: The God of Magic

Book&Literature · CORNBRINGER

Spenma

2yr

Commented

Sorry this book is a bit too cringe for me… tried to continue to read it but the jokes arent reallY funny to me. Im sure others will like it but im dropping It.

ch 0 2 Running To Death From A Zebra

Red Dead To The World

Games · Ultimatedaywriter

Spenma

2yr

Commented

So odd…. The mc just acted as if everythinG was normal when a stAtus screen was Presented to him. He also convenient happened to have an ar15 anD ammunition just sitting in his roo….its a bIt forced for me but ill continue reading.

ch 0 1 Dropping In

Red Dead To The World

Games · Ultimatedaywriter

Spenma

2yr

Posted

Started off good. Then at Chapter 5 I started to get confused because of the Bad grammar. struggled thrOugh and I didnt find It worTh reading.

Lost in the 1st Millenium AD

Fantasy · Ritankar_Sarkar_

Spenma

3yr

Commented

Isnt nion a female in dbz??

He looked down and exclaimed in surprise. His body was perfect and ripped. Lean and explosive muscles in every part of his body were visible. he was naked as well!

Greatest Warrior of The Multiverse

Movies · TheMystic

Spenma

3yr

Commented

Damn tall 👀

His height had increased by about 4 inches, leaving him at around 6 ft 5 inches.

The Supreme Sage

Fantasy · Shadow_Magus

Spenma

3yr

Replied to Swordguy7

Neckbeard is Talking

That rabbit.

Bloodlines of the Ancient Pantheons

Fantasy · Immanioripse

Spenma

3yr

Posted

Eh its okay I guess. HoNestly it was a Bit hard tO get into the book as The Starting chapters are really cringey and it has time skips of weeks and months which mAke It seems disconnected. I also believe the author should’ve showed more and not just bLanTly tell us. Its an okay read if you got nothing else to read otherwise it can be Improved. I would just say Read to Chapter 25 and if you cant bear It anymore, drop it.