Saiv

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2017-08-23 Joined Global
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Saiv
Saiv
2 months ago
Posted

I'm speechless as to how bad this is, it's an info dump rather than a story and just straight up tells summary of movies with 2-3 repeating lines with context being I have worked hard and I'm reborn

Saiv
Saiv
1 years ago
Posted

Interesting take on canon by exploring gwen's spiderverse the mc needs to be humbled a bit but otherwise looks good, hopefully the author will continue updating

Saiv
Saiv
1 years ago
Posted

The writing is too robotic feels like ai generated contains too much extra information the story seems good with different povs but is a bit headache inducing for me at least, I hope the author works on this otherwise seems like a good story

Saiv
Saiv
Saiv
3 years ago
Commented

Kindly do a timeskip so much filler is getting boring

Saiv
Saiv
4 years ago
Posted

The grammar and syntax is so wrong that I can't even understand what is happening kindly try to proofread you own work and check if someone else can understand it