To me it doesn't look like a fulfilled relationship. Someone in a fulfilled relationship should not think about his ex in such an intimate way as you describe and with such regrate. If he never left Nitis his relationship with Monica will never happened in a way in his subconcouse he is willing to give up Monica. That is not a fulfilled relationship or true love. Also all the times he is looking at his tatoo lately it doesn't look like a person who has moved on and is in a happy relationship. Don't get me wrong I love the storry and you are doing a greate job at it. That is why I am so emotionaly involved. I know that a lot of readers don't like Monika but she really loves Khan with her everyting and reading about how you exprese her love for Khan I can't happen but to think that this is trully unfair to her.
ch 755 Fury
Fantasy · Eveofchaos
Maybe not a substitute but to me she still feals like a place holder a doormat until you bring Lizz back. If he really loved Monica his last toughts should be about her not Lizz. You put Monica in the same category with Jenna and George that doesn't look loke true love for me.
ch 755 Fury
Fantasy · Eveofchaos
So Monica is just a subtitute a pleaceholder that teaches him how to love normaly. Eve you are doing Monica dirty. No woman will likes to be used like that. If you want to make a epic love storry bettwen Khan and Lizz then keep him single and focuse on the figts and the Nakh. It's not fair for any woman to be used like that no one deserse it.
ch 755 Fury
Fantasy · Eveofchaos
'His ignorance makes him more likable, though. He was an idiot before he met Michael, but thinking about it…he is kinda cute.'
Fantasy · HideousGrain
[Michael~ What is going on there? Is that my future sister-in-law? Good choice!]
Fantasy · HideousGrain
The corner of Alice's lips tucked upward upon seeing Michael, but he couldn't look into her eyes. After the all-night talk with his brother, Michael couldn't help but feel awkward around Alice. She noticed that he avoided her eyes in surprise but said nothing. The corners of her lips twitched and curled into a thin smile.
Fantasy · HideousGrain
Well that is true Monica always know about that side of Khan and is sad. She should be more like "if I give you my all I also expect your all not half of it" All I can do is continue reading to see if she is after all a place holder or not. I just wish you don't kill her. I prefer her creating a way out for herself in case things don't work out with Khan.
ch 755 Fury
Chaos' Heir
Fantasy · Eveofchaos