Webnovel Author: Littleluckyrabbit - Novel Collection

Author here, going to shamelessly give myself a 5 star review lol[img=recommend]. This is a cultivation novel where the characters will grow up and so hopefully will my writing ability.

I gave a low rating because I was very disappointed in consistency. Every character design collapsed without warning, so it sometimes seemed as though they were completely different people out of nowhere. I also think that the author got caught up in having exciting and climactic chapters without considering whether those plot developments actually made sense with what was already written. I normally try to stay away from such dramatic stories for this reason, but I was impressed with the author's writing fluency which is a breath of fresh air among many grammatical tragedies on here. However, even after trying to force myself through over 100 chapters I finally gave up. The main character has a rough past which leads him to be emotionally unstable. But if you are going to portray him as a strong but struggling character, then keep him that way. Not have him emotionally torn between every other character in the story like some harem novel protagonist. As for the character Jayden, through a large part of the story he was portrayed in one light(trying not to spoil) bit then abruptly everything in the past was a lie? It didn't make sense, with the little to nonexistent foreshadowing. I am not trying to be overly critical, but I think either the story needed to be paced a little slower or there is a very large plothole. I hope that the author continues to pursue their passion for writing as they are very talented.