Story could probably use more time developing inter character relationships. Not every chapter has to have some big fight event for example it could just be a date with Laura or growing the friendship with the other avengers. Imo it would feel bad breaking him and Laura up as with their mutant powers who else could they be with they will both have such long lifespans and they haven't even had a decently long conversation. Food for thought I guess.
ch 38 Chapter 38: Flames of destiny
Others · Passerby_Venne
He could watch my hero academia and get one for all when all might gives the hair to deku.
ch 0 8 The Super Grandmother
Anime & Comics · RyuGin
Not gonna lie I thought this was gonna be a chapter where he learned to efficiently grind the intelligence stat.
ch 18 Intelligence for Dummies
Anime & Comics · Einlion
Good thing I keep checking this in my library.
ch 102 Chapter 102: Naruto 16
Anime & Comics · TheOneThatRead
This guy just gonna comment trash on each chapter yet still continue to read?
ch 10 Chapter 10
Anime & Comics · alfaromeo237
You can have your character play the dragon ball games and take out the dragon balls.
ch 36 Red armor. Nah, I like the color blue
Video Games · thelightedghost
I was thinking the same thing. He could find the special magazines from fallout and increase all of his stats.
ch 31 Cat fights are not fun
Video Games · thelightedghost
This still going?
ch 95 Chapter 95: Naruto 9
Anime & Comics · TheOneThatRead
Can he get the virus from prototype?
ch 11 Persuade to get 50% discount
Video Games · thelightedghost
Odd choice of reverse doggie there for 40 min.
ch 16 Devil VS AKUMA/Shower R18
Anime & Comics · MYsltIcALAuTHoR
He's not using the party function?
ch 0 2 Ch 7 Training My Martial Arts , Asking for a double
Anime & Comics · FaNFiC_Writer_2000
Man how long is it gonna take for him to upgrade his occlumency and get that potion. I am enjoying the story though otherwise.
ch 28 Chapter 28: Special Rewards and Reactions
Book&Literature · Snollygoster
It's extremely annoying how they are trying to force people on to the app. I like the web page setup so much better and this makes me not even want to use webnovel anymore tbh.
ch 0 1 Visitor from Another World
Movies · Kayako
It makes sense that he keeps his original name since he plans to leave this world. His whole goal is to do to dxd in which case why would he completely abandon his original name when as soon as he gets to the next world he will use Ian again. It makes sense though to use this worlds name when in front of non friends as it would be weird to randomly use his original name.
ch 10 Chapter 10: The hot Dungeon Explorations teacher
This isn't High School DxD, damn it!
Anime & Comics · The_POZ