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P1k4ch6: Ah, some lucky fellow met Truck-kun and is having reincarnation adventure 😁Nightmare's Call · C41
ChayceMT: Automatic washers were invented in the early 1900’s and were commonplace not that long after, in the 1970’s the first microchip controlled washer was created, so unless he is living in the 1800’s I find this very hard to believeNightmare's Call · C23
Alpha_Lustrous: Hao ren in future : i am the bone of my swordDragon King's Son-In-Law · C177
Zerot_Solar: He/His/Him for male
She/Her for female
Check the paragraphs you made the same errors again and again 🙄Sun Prince · C1
notlair: I struggled reading up to chapter 7 because of the bad grammar,
The story itself has a decent potential but the grammar is dragging it down,
So author, you need to proofread this or even use grammarly, or other websites that helps in checking/correcting grammarsm..m.One Piece: Bouny System
AGoodBargain: I've given up on reading after one chapter. The translation quality is just that horrible. If you can live with that, this mihjt still be a great novel. However, I can't enjoy this quality..Warlord of Chaos
Brezer: So haven't made it past the 1st chapter so far but the translation is terrible, its reading like a nooby author. So ya the translation already needs help. Not sure on the rest so far but you would think a site that has mainly translated stories would make sure translations would be right.Warlord of Chaos
Asmodai216: Writing Quality: Trash tier. The grammar is awful, you can tell the writer isn't a native English speaker. It's legible, you can understand it, but a 5 minute spelling and grammar check on each chapter isn't too much to ask for.
Stability of Updates: The author Seion writes a bunch of different system based stories and updates all of them with great frequency. This is great as far as updating the story goes, but it seriously detracts from the quality of the story. An author churning out multiple updates a day for different stories will end up suffering when it comes to quality and foresight.
Story Development: Like a lot of the sub-standard wish fulfillment series on this site, the pacing of the story is very quick. Characters who should gradually build up a relationship with others are instead instantly won over for no real reason, and a bunch of plot points are not thought out well... Whatsoever... At all.
Character Design: The MC we're given is freaking ridiculous. I personally appreciate an MC I can relate to, but I usually like an MC that has a fleshed out character. This MC fails to react with anything resembling common sense, decency, caution, or any other reasonable character trait. For fucks sake, in chapter 8 he literally molests a goddess and goes on to say that he likes things to be consensual.
Speaking of, the characters from the series are massively OOC with no real explanation given. Sure, some basic traits are there, but they are railroaded onto whatever path the author wants with no explanation other than, "Hurr durr, Hestia is cute, I don't care if she's a virgin goddess who only fell for the pure-hearted Bell after he spent months earnestly supporting her, I want her to get with my supah awesome MC." I don't even care if he stole her from Bell, just make it actually make some damn sense.
Then there are the background characters who just go along with this complete bull****.
World Background: The only reason this is getting 2 stars is because of the ALREADY FUNCTIONING world provided by virtue of being FANFICTION. Frankly, the additions made regarding the system, the MCs abilities, and his self-insert into an adventurer's body make no goddamn sense whatsoever.
"Hey Eina, I'm already level 3 despite not being in a familia. It doesn't matter that even having a level at all requires someone to have a falna, I'm supah aweshome and you'll totally believe me"
"I've never been apart of a familia, even though the body I took over was actually apart of one before I got here."
Summary: This is a pretty standard work for the author, Seion. Crappy grammar, characters and powers that don't make any damn sense. Railroading into relationships that don't make any damn sense from the chicks standpoint. Generic crappy wish-fulfillment fanfic is trash.Dungeon System Within DanMachi
NulZilch: Why would he agree to the job? Bull, forced plot 10/10. He already had enough money to leave gotham. I predict him to be getting deeper and deeper into this drama, then we would have some reaction chapters. Usual stuff i guess. Hard to find any smooth fic on webnovel.Fate/Heroes · C8
Eternal Sin · C3
The Dragon Prince's Wife is a Translator · C1
Sugar and Spice: The CEO’s Feisty Wife · C1
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