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the attachment of villin towards professor crumb felt a tad too forcefull, i felt like you rushed it. I mean he was around him for less than a month and there was not enough development in that aspect which made me feel like it was too superficial. Also villin mentioned earlier that he would not participate in the would be retaliation toward decorus as he already made his contribution to the academy but when the attack was called he didn't mention it. there were a few other thing to be honest but i don't remember ( goldfish memory here :p ) Anyway good job and with this standard it's perfect.

while some of the early story made me want to drop it the recent development made it so worthwhile and to be more precise the two last chapter are really good. Thx for the chap and i really regret that i can't binge anymore.

Villin be like : Do you know how I got these scars ?