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Congrats on finishing the novel! Was a huge fan of this story, and Shiro as a character in general. I admit that the ending feels a bit rushed, like the whole battle with the Gods arc was kind of skipped over. A lot of loose ends too. Whatever happened to the trickster queen? Small things like that. It felt like you were writing without really contemplating an ending, then suddenly decided you wanted to finish the novel and wrote straight to the ending. Felt kind of awkward. Not really sure what the point of the ending was. She went through all of that just to take the place of Anima.... Why? What did it accomplish? Also wished the epilogue was a bit longer. Anyway, for a novel this long, those are all tiny "complaints". More like questions. Thanks again for the great read!!

Don't care what anyone says. 2 years with no update? It's not on hiatus. It's dropped. Or is the author going to try to spit out one of those stupid comments saying "It's on indefinite hiatus" ....

BOOOOOO! Don't start a novel if you can't finish it. Amateur.

You need to proofread your chapters better or get an editor. I’m not sure if English is your first language or not, but a lot of sentences are poorly written or just flat out wrong.

Ahh yes, missing the first two chapters of the novel for years and still hasn’t been fixed. That’s how you know it’s webnovel.com quality. That and the title being translated as the lord of demon. Is he the lord of ONE demon or something?

Can't agree. She fights against him most of the time. Her giving up against fighting after a little bit doesn't mean what he originally did is okay. If a girl is fighting against something you're trying to do physically to her, YOU STOP. End of story. No quibbling. You stop.

More like most of the readers are a disappointment, as they're the low-bred fools who suck up that cliche garbage. God forbid they read something that doesn't have an arrogant young master enemy in every chapter who dies in the next.

??? Did the comma fiend of a translator run out of commas or something? Is that why they stopped translating? That's what they get for putting 4 to 5 commas in every sentence. Maybe they learned commas aren't a fix-it-all remedy in the English language and were shocked into dropping the novel? Anyway, Webnovel's business practice concerning this is really scummy. It's pretty much "Oh well" to all the readers who were left hanging or who had spent a lot of money on it. Which is why I'm smart enough not to.... >:]

Lately, the phrasing in this translation has gotten more and more awkward. She beamed gently? That's so weird. None of it is usually wrong, per se, but it's just so awkward that sometimes it comes close to not making any sense.

When did her uncle actually speak about her being unreasonable? I see when she answered the phone and said "Hello?". Then she tells him off and hangs up without him saying anything. Did the translator miss a paragraph or something?

Really enjoying this novel. Any idea on what completion it's currently at? I'm just worried it'll be one of those novels that are great for 1,000 chapters, and because of that, the author keeps going and going and going and going instead of ending it properly. Hope it's a novel that ends when it's suppose to, keeping it's greatness. :)

Not really enjoyable to read this as it's obvious the translator didn't read the prequels. He doesn't use the same terminology that's been used in all the other translations, calling Soul Masters Spirit Masters and Douluo continent "Soul Land". Those are just the first couple of things. Just feels really uncomfortable to read.