2nd time through - great writing!!!
ch 0 6 Is my father Houdini?
Anime & Comics · MoneyBall
I can't stop giggling over "budget Byakugan" - very witty writing!
ch 0 1 Chapter 1:
Anime & Comics · Auther_Uchiha
I thought the crypt scene was perfectly okay. I think a descriptive journey through to her tomb would only be necessary if elements introduced were needed for plot development. Excellent writing! Please update soon if possible!
ch 0 8 Next chapter tomorrow!
TV · Cadmus_black
Excellent writing!!
ch 10 The Knight of the Laughing Tree come again
TV · Alex_Van_zyl
Excellent writing!! I find the writing style very soothing and relaxing which makes sentences like "Oh dear god, Is my father Houdini?" very humorous to me. It doesn't have a lot of action so far other than training but it is still an enjoyable read. I look forward to how the plot will develop in the future.
Ghost - A Naruto Fanfic
Anime & Comics · MoneyBall