xscraid

xscraid

2mth

Commented

The answer is plot.

ch 12 Chapter 12: Preparations

Naruto: Stormninja

Anime & Comics · AkaneMint

xscraid

3mth

Commented

This story kinda pointless if he have no memory of Kingdom.

ch 0 5 Chapter 5: A Great General

Kingdom: The Path Of A General

Anime & Comics · Noiir

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3mth

Posted

Ever seen two snails raced each other to boink a female snail at the finish line? That's the pace of this story, the snails be faster. Not badly written per say, other than few cringe dialogues but that's understandable considering MC trying to pass as a kid. But author god-damn! Snort some cocaine or something, I am about to fell to sleep with your pacing. Cocaine laced with Red Bull should help.

Naruto: Subject #37

Anime & Comics · _Wint3r_

xscraid

4mth

Commented

Time to break chains.....again.

ch 97 97

GOT/ASOIAF: Son of the Unworthy

Book&Literature · Pretending_Author

xscraid

4mth

Commented

Did you know Viggo broke his foot kicking a helmet during the scene where they discovered Merry and Pippin's belt among the burnt carcasses of Uruk Hai. His screams of anguish was because he was in real pain.

ch 140 HWI 140

Hollywood What If

Movies · pujimaki

xscraid

4mth

Replied to limiyou

I forget the the RAW but the original author is White Thirteen, He got a couple of Hollywood themed novels under his belt. Just go to any MTL site and search for Hollywood tag, chances are you will found one of his story.

Hollywood Fame and Fortune

Realistic · Rqmk

xscraid

4mth

Commented

Boring and predictable.

ch 0 6 06...

In Marvel with the Perfect Body...

Anime & Comics · Aaron_Chong_6689

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5mth

Replied to DaoisthsNVEE

Not the author but yes, he bang...he bang...

ch 90 90

GOT/ASOIAF: Son of the Unworthy

Book&Literature · Pretending_Author

xscraid

7mth

Replied to DR_ELFWAL

Why not just put that as the title "The Ladder by Twubs".

ch 0 1 ch 1

Game of Thrones : King Peter

TV · DR_ELFWAL

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7mth

Commented

Isn't this The Ladder by Twubs?

ch 0 1 ch 1

Game of Thrones : King Peter

TV · DR_ELFWAL

xscraid

7mth

Commented

Sorry, this story not making sense anymore...even Spielberg can't build his own distribution chanel without big 6 interfering and his is a big name director with Jewish descent...make your own movie with your own money only for the big studio to squeeze you during the release. Quit being childish.

ch 79 HWI 79

Hollywood What If

Movies · pujimaki

xscraid

7mth

Commented

That's what happens when your creative team and upper management got infiltrated by wokeist hellbent on pushing political agenda even at cost of share holder profits. They don't care because most of worship Karl Marx anyway.

ch 78 HWI 78

Hollywood What If

Movies · pujimaki

xscraid

8mth

Commented

Use writing aid like gramarly because your format are terrible.

ch 0 1 prologue| where am I is that a system? *edited*

{Star Wars} Empire Building gamer system

Anime & Comics · God_loves_reading

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9mth

Replied to BLACK_GLOOM

This was in the 90s well before woke crap. I guess this just the author trying to make some plot for convenience sake. This story kinda becoming confusing to me, kinda odd flavor. Story structure like a Chinese Webnovel shit but it felt like written by an Indian.

ch 57 HWI 57