Christ this guy is a crybaby. Every other chapter he's balling his eyes out. This one is a bit understandable tho
Lind was crying. The writing was his mother's! A gentle embrace encircled him as Shoti let him vent a little over a year of isolation from all he loved. Darkmoor Kingdom and Lotus Empire could stop small powers, but they could do nothing to stop a Heavenly Maiden or Divine Sword Sect if they were determined. Shoti even used the cover of coming to the capitol to allay any suspicion if they should meet up.
Eastern · mythosarcana
Everything about how he's handled the ink rain group and their conspiracy has been incredibly negligent so far. From not reporting the attempted enslavement to the many powerful cultivators almost begging to support him and now this dismissal despite kit being reasonable assumption some of the martial sect would have been captured previous when he escaped from the guy trying to enslave them.
Ignoring that little oddity, Cain said, "This time, Kali's boast is right, Amber. I don't perceive anything remarkable about them. They most likely just have some weird personalities."
Eastern · CosmicPrime
She's one to talk
"This is simply the price to pay for being so arrogant." Kali's cold words were the last thing the captains would ever hear.
Eastern · CosmicPrime
Yes, let's just say my greatest secret out loud in a dangerous place. Makes sense . I hate it when authors suddenly make their protagonists do uncharacteristically stupid things to advance some plot point.
"I have experienced this before… after I died, I was in a place like this for some minutes before I reincarnated…".
Fantasy · Barion_Trident
That's what I was thinking, of he doesn't he got robbed picking necromancer instead of getting a whole other class like the unique summoner class. With all those skills that may have synergistic effects with the necromancer skill he got from the book he'd be a lot stronger than just a +1 to like one skill.
ch 59 The Forgotten Queen
Fantasy · Elyon
I have no ideywhy Helen is even on this mission with them? What does she bring that warranted Lux bringing her?
Lux gritted his teeth as he stood in front of Helen and fought off any Kobolds that had managed to break through the vanguard's defenses.
Fantasy · Elyon
There have been several in this story so far, all of which have been to the protagonists advantage.
There Is No Coincidence In The World
Fantasy · Elyon
Note: This Skeleton is going to be the next Pirate King!
Fantasy · Elyon
This is way to convenient given it was never mentioned before. What's the point of the skill descriptions if there are so many exceptions that are not mentioned until the author finds it convenient.
< Skill Evolution [EX] has detected that the skill Fury Slash can be upgraded one more time. >
Fantasy · Elyon
It's one thing to knowingly be a heroic fool it's another to naively think everyone else is too. Doing that out in the field is going to get him or his friends killed. This is a modern man from earth, how is he this innocent.
"Lux," Lux said. "I don't need any repayment. I just did what needed to be done. I'm sure that if you were in my shoes, both of you would have done the same."
Fantasy · Elyon
I feel like the tone of these characters would make a lot more sense if they were like 3 years older.
"I'll find out your true colors soon," Robin said softly. "If you are a threat to this kingdom… I will make sure that you will never be heard from again."
Fantasy · Elyon
This is why I usually avoid the stories that prominently place the comedy tag first. I disapprove of the unwarranted silliness in an otherwise serious story. having dead children one chapter and daft butt penetration humour the other sends the story tone haywire.
Augustus shifted his body in order to deflect Lux's attack and weaken its momentum. However, just before he could properly block the Half-Elf's attack, a moan of pain and pleasure escaped his lips.
Fantasy · Elyon
I thought he was going to kill steal.
Only after Lux was certain that all the mosquitoes had left did he order Diablo to move towards the corpse lying on the ground.
Fantasy · Elyon
This would be less pathetic if he was also 12, inspiration even. But right now he's just the creepy uncle trying to relive his childhood by hanging out with literal children. If his reasoning was to look out for them rather than experience a friendship adventure using them it would be more acceptable.
Lux closed his eyes and the images of Colette and the other dwarves appeared in his head. They were the first companions that he had met in Elysium, and thought that it wouldn't be a bad idea to go on adventures with them while he was still in Leaf Village.
Fantasy · Elyon
Then say that the first time, you're talking to literal children.
"I'm not saying that we should challenge it now," Lux replied to Matty. "Before we leave Leaf Village, most of us will be in the Apostle Rank. That is the perfect time to challenge the Hell Mode difficulty. Are you sure you don't want to leave your mark here to be seen by future generations?"
Fantasy · Elyon
Quit irresponsible given he's like much much older than these 12 year olds lol.
"So, you're finally here," Matty said in an annoyed expression. "What took you so long? I've been waiting here for twenty minutes already!"
Fantasy · Elyon
Updating my review because I'm really not enjoying where the novel is going in the latest chapters.
Herald of Steel
War · FerriticMatrix