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VynDahl
LV 12Back in the myriad grasslands of happy hamsters.
2017-05-25 Joined IsraelBadges 8
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Another great catch, thank you!
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I think this one might be autocorrected.
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Great suggestion
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Invincible Hero, it's the first novel I worked on. I put it up as a rough draft, so it might be frustrating to read. I like the story and will eventually edit it. The alien race is first mentioned in the IH story.
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maybe so :)
Today was orientation day. Rem stayed up way too late the night before. He was too excited to sleep.
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Thanks for the catch!
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No, the letter is only quoted in part.
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I'm glad to hear it. I'll keep the chapters coming!
ch 0 6 Orientation Day (5)
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They want him to become a ruler as well. He is beginning the training journey that is customary in their family. They use reincarnation as a means of gathering experience, biological data, new techniques, and so forth. SPOILERS?
With those words said, the Emperor activated his laser vision. First, he started by destroying the Warships, but finally, he turned those inborn death rays on the last members of the Usurper Army. Everyone was disintegrated. If one were able to see their souls they would see that as the souls flew out to rejoin the universe they first past through an energy field which branded the souls. The execution was finally over. With the destruction of this army, the Usurper War was finally over. The Empire was secured.
The Invincible Hero
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Thank you!
"Uh, you're too young to know that. Just know that he's at the highest level of forging possible in the lower realms of the multi-verse," said Master River.
The Invincible Hero
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Thanks. Afrina was a combination of Africa and China. Everyone looks like Africans but they have cultivation like China.
Bwiri waved her hand and three stones appeared. She handed a stone to each man. Next, she brought out three bowls. In each bowl, she placed a special liquid. Looking at the set up with a satisfied expression, Bwiri looked at each of the men.
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Sci-fi · VynDahl
thanks!
ch 0 3 The Invincible Hero Versus the Invincible Army
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I responded! I guess you didn't get it. I'm not writing on this novel any more for the time being. I don't know when I'll do a third volume. If I do a third novel I'll ping you. You've been awesome and I'm glad you like the novel so much.
ch 96 Flying Forward
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Sci-fi · VynDahl
No, I started volume three but haven't written it yet. I'm glad you liked it. I would like to edit the story and republish it.
ch 96 Flying Forward
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