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2017-10-27 Joined United States
ch 12 Chapter 12 : Carl's Power!
Anime & Comics · Ani_Scout
Scott coughed twice from where he stood, rising from the ground and dusting off his uniform. With a composed demeanor, he assured, "I'm alright."
Anime & Comics · Ani_Scout
With a grip strength of six tons, each punch packed a force of at least twelve tons. Adding a charge would further enhance the explosive power with additional kinetic energy.
Anime & Comics · Ani_Scout
On top of that if he were to reveal Fuinjutsu, Spirit Transformation Technique and a bunch of jutsu only once used by Tobirama, anyone would be able to see that he has a problem.
Anime & Comics · Tobi_444
"Yeah, The Blue Storm of Leaf! Truly turning out to be the difference maker."
Anime & Comics · Tobi_444
Closing his eyes, Izuku both surprised and impressed All Might by saying, "As I am, I'm unworthy of such power. After all, while it's true that I want to help people, my reasons for becoming a Hero are fairly selfish. Leading the next generation and becoming the Symbol of Peace...I'm not sure I'm capable of such selflessness..."
Anime & Comics · Einlion
With his current physical attributes, Izuku doubted he could defeat even the weakest Villain bot. If he focused on helping people, however, there was a good chance he could pass without needing to. The only problem was that the UA Entrance Exam was just the beginning. Once he became a student, Izuku would be expected to participate in combat and rescue training, exercises that would require skillful use of one's Quirk or a strong physique.
Anime & Comics · Einlion
With his current physical attributes, Izuku doubted he could defeat even the weakest Villain bot. If he focused on helping people, however, there was a good chance he could pass without needing to. The only problem was that the UA Entrance Exam was just the beginning. Once he became a student, Izuku would be expected to participate in combat and rescue training, exercises that would require skillful use of one's Quirk or a strong physique.
Anime & Comics · Einlion
That night, that particular basement was filled with screams of utter despair of a woman that shall haunt the building for the years to come..
Anime & Comics · Moziel
Ignoring the intense gaze of Illyana and whatever i sensed from her using my [Empathy], I extended my [TK Domain] and observed the houses near us and the residents within them. Seeing all of them acting normal was enough as it seems they didn't really heard the pained howls of father just now. Not bad, seems like the soundproof force-field i placed around the house was effective.
Anime & Comics · Moziel
Minutes turned to hours as they converse and laughed along the tour trying to know more about each other. Andrew was already getting bored with the constant talk and touring as he already explored most of the big mansion's corners using his TK Domain and was already getting sleepy–fighting a gigantic nigh immortal bear is taxing if you don't know.
Anime & Comics · Moziel
She liked Lin Lingtian .
Anime & Comics · Adamo_Amet
[ Soul Force Infusion : 50 Pure of Attributeless and All Attributed Soul Force entering the Dantian per second ]
Anime & Comics · Adamo_Amet
[ Soul Force Infusion : 50 Pure of Attributeless and All Attributed Soul Force entering the Dantian per second ]
Anime & Comics · Adamo_Amet
Yang Xin opened her eyes and saw she was kissing Lin Lingtian's palms .
Anime & Comics · Adamo_Amet
The War God Technique had stopped circulating .
Anime & Comics · Adamo_Amet
ch 105 Chapter 105 - Laboon!
Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague
While fists clashed and chaos flames danced in the air, Luffy, on the other hand, quickly analyzed the situation amid the intense fight. His thoughts were a whirlwind of strategies and reflections. "Damn... I'm barely scratching the surface of this fight. My natural strength is classified as B, and by transforming, I reach a rank A state. If I enhance my strength with the Moa Moa no Mi, I would reach S level, but I'd still be below my grandfather, who likely boasts strength at SS or SSS level. Not to mention the other stats where I would lose an advantage by using the Moa Moa no Mi to boost my speed."
Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague
ch 20 The duel of the titans
Games · Hamapo
DaoistFreddieG
[Pulverize-Pulverize Fruit - Gives the user the ability to crush anything into pieces, making them a Pulverizing Human.]
One Piece: Path to Power
Anime & Comics · Paradox_