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DaoistFreddieG

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I’ve read a lot so if I critique your book, just know it’s just tough love and I’m most likely gonna keep on reading... unless your novel is trash and the grammar sucks

2017-10-27 Joined United States

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Should’ve called it the crush crush fruit

[Pulverize-Pulverize Fruit - Gives the user the ability to crush anything into pieces, making them a Pulverizing Human.]

One Piece: Path to Power

One Piece: Path to Power

Anime & Comics · Paradox_

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Just say he reverse engineered it

On top of that if he were to reveal Fuinjutsu, Spirit Transformation Technique and a bunch of jutsu only once used by Tobirama, anyone would be able to see that he has a problem.

Konoha: The Template System

Konoha: The Template System

Anime & Comics · Tobi_444

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What type of idiot passes up the ability to become one of the strongest people in the universe? Especially when he knows the plot and how to control said power. It sounds so dumb to pass that up.

Closing his eyes, Izuku both surprised and impressed All Might by saying, "As I am, I'm unworthy of such power. After all, while it's true that I want to help people, my reasons for becoming a Hero are fairly selfish. Leading the next generation and becoming the Symbol of Peace...I'm not sure I'm capable of such selflessness..."

BNHA: Singularity

BNHA: Singularity

Anime & Comics · Einlion

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I stand corrected lol

With his current physical attributes, Izuku doubted he could defeat even the weakest Villain bot. If he focused on helping people, however, there was a good chance he could pass without needing to. The only problem was that the UA Entrance Exam was just the beginning. Once he became a student, Izuku would be expected to participate in combat and rescue training, exercises that would require skillful use of one's Quirk or a strong physique.

BNHA: Singularity

BNHA: Singularity

Anime & Comics · Einlion

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So just put 50 in each category. Bakugo had like 25-30 points for each category, roughly. I’m pretty sure that him putting 50 in each would make him stand out and he get the traits. You’re just nerfing him for the exam for no reason.

With his current physical attributes, Izuku doubted he could defeat even the weakest Villain bot. If he focused on helping people, however, there was a good chance he could pass without needing to. The only problem was that the UA Entrance Exam was just the beginning. Once he became a student, Izuku would be expected to participate in combat and rescue training, exercises that would require skillful use of one's Quirk or a strong physique.

BNHA: Singularity

BNHA: Singularity

Anime & Comics · Einlion

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So he decides not to read her mind? Learn a whole bunch of secrets? Lack of impulse control

That night, that particular basement was filled with screams of utter despair of a woman that shall haunt the building for the years to come..

Psionic (Marvel)

Psionic (Marvel)

Anime & Comics · Moziel

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I see you like the dumb and dense protagonist troupe. Honestly disgusting.

Ignoring the intense gaze of Illyana and whatever i sensed from her using my [Empathy], I extended my [TK Domain] and observed the houses near us and the residents within them. Seeing all of them acting normal was enough as it seems they didn't really heard the pained howls of father just now. Not bad, seems like the soundproof force-field i placed around the house was effective.

Psionic (Marvel)

Psionic (Marvel)

Anime & Comics · Moziel

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He barely fought it for less than a minute

Minutes turned to hours as they converse and laughed along the tour trying to know more about each other. Andrew was already getting bored with the constant talk and touring as he already explored most of the big mansion's corners using his TK Domain and was already getting sleepy–fighting a gigantic nigh immortal bear is taxing if you don't know.

Psionic (Marvel)

Psionic (Marvel)

Anime & Comics · Moziel

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Soul force*

[ Soul Force Infusion : 50 Pure of Attributeless and All Attributed Soul Force entering the Dantian per second ]

Tales of Demons and Gods : I can Augment My Statuses

Tales of Demons and Gods : I can Augment My Statuses

Anime & Comics · Adamo_Amet

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He can gain 10,000 soul points in three minutes and 20 seconds

[ Soul Force Infusion : 50 Pure of Attributeless and All Attributed Soul Force entering the Dantian per second ]

Tales of Demons and Gods : I can Augment My Statuses

Tales of Demons and Gods : I can Augment My Statuses

Anime & Comics · Adamo_Amet

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Garp isn’t known for his speed so why not boost his strength rather than his speed?

While fists clashed and chaos flames danced in the air, Luffy, on the other hand, quickly analyzed the situation amid the intense fight. His thoughts were a whirlwind of strategies and reflections. "Damn... I'm barely scratching the surface of this fight. My natural strength is classified as B, and by transforming, I reach a rank A state. If I enhance my strength with the Moa Moa no Mi, I would reach S level, but I'd still be below my grandfather, who likely boasts strength at SS or SSS level. Not to mention the other stats where I would lose an advantage by using the Moa Moa no Mi to boost my speed."

One Piece - I Am A Different Luffy!

One Piece - I Am A Different Luffy!

Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague

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