HeavenBreaker

1mth

Commented

Guess the epilogue author note of 5-6 chapters a week was a lie. Bought the max level of privilege and it feels like a massive waste.

ch 271 First Stop - Tavern 2

No More Pain For This Villain.

Fantasy · Satan03

HeavenBreaker

5mth

Commented

SHANGG

Suddenly, he was reminded of a certain Sword God in a World of Magic.

Return Of The Strongest Player

Fantasy · AceAmbrosia

HeavenBreaker

6mth

Commented

These comments need to remember the emotions are run by the old Ren. Smh people don't even remember basic plot and then complain

"N-no," I stuttered there—not a good move when dealing with a cop or an armoured knight.

No More Pain For This Villain.

Fantasy · Satan03

HeavenBreaker

6mth

Replied to KayaReads

I'll take that as a yes

"And me?" he asked.

HeavenBreaker

6mth

Replied to KayaReads

Marry me please

"And me?" he asked.

HeavenBreaker

8mth

Commented

Direct quote from Greg the lightning manuwu! w...w...what do you think about me Shang senpai? *blushes furiously*

"And me?" he asked.

HeavenBreaker

1yr

Commented

that's Nocturne

"Are you afraid of the Dark?"

Strongest Necromancer Of Heaven's Gate

Fantasy · Elyon

HeavenBreaker

1yr

Commented

"I can't use any more distractions."

HeavenBreaker

1yr

Commented

where is the legendary item for beating Nero?

ch 514 The Sooner, The Better

Strongest Necromancer Of Heaven's Gate

Fantasy · Elyon

HeavenBreaker

1yr

Commented

infinite boning 🤔

[ Endurance : Infinite ]

HeavenBreaker

1yr

Commented

getting a strong experimental lot of the crazy loch vibe here but in a very different n good way

ch 0 1 Welcome to the Tower (I)

HeavenBreaker

1yr

Commented

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The Evolution of a Goblin to the Peak

Fantasy · DonnEll

HeavenBreaker

1yr

Commented

if it's nurturing the DNA helix directly... then it should be on the molecular level not cellular.

His face did not show it but his body was going through tremendous pain and irritation. It was as if his blood was set on fire. The boy did not let out even as much as a whimper. His tolerance alone was enough to shock the people. The gene serum was nurturing his DNA chain on a cellular level. Shi Lang could sense that his ability to sense the things around him was improving to a frightening level.

Ace Of Terrans

Sci-fi · THE_WORDSMITH

HeavenBreaker

2yr

Commented

adding stuff like, "no one else in the history of everything has ever done it" makes the impact of that go away. Now it's just annoying and doesn't carry any weight. next thing we know the MC spits on the ground and the writer will be like, "no one has ever spat at the ground with that level of speed and power in all of history". Understand the significance of what you are saying and spamming it will make it lose its meaning

A First Order creature was nothing in Lilith's eyes and just one look was enough to wipe out an entire army. However, when she was still an Unclassified existence, she could not do what Bai Zemin had just done... No, not only she could not; probably no one in all recorded history was ever able to kill an enemy who was in a higher Order in less than three seconds.

Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse

Fantasy · XIETIAN

HeavenBreaker

2yr

Commented

Desir Arman, "A Returner’s Magic Should Be Special" confirmed. The overall threat to the protagonist and the special abilities feel very similar, but the world and setting is very different. I'd highly recommend giving "A Returner’s Magic Should Be Special" a try if you like this novel. They are different enough to both be enjoyed in unique ways

Among these disciplines, there were a few greatly respected. Those that followed this discipline were known as Decriptionists. They had the ability to deconstruct any Force Art and see through their flaws. Those of this profession were invaluable in high level Zones and when exploring the graves of high-grade Dimensional Masters.

Dimensional Descent

Fantasy · Awespec

HeavenBreaker

2yr

Commented

No clue what this means, no idea how it sets up the chapter

Burkurel Ju’Tha

Murim Recurve

Fantasy · Overlord_Venus

HeavenBreaker

2yr

Commented

Hey author, could you please make a glossary to define the words that relate to Hinduism/bhuddism. Like Tikka, Prana/pranic, trimukhya, and other stuff. The majority of your readers are mostly English speaking so it's very difficult to visualize the meaning behind certain things. Like I know what a Tikka is, but if u use it in a descriptive manner, most people will not be able to visualize it.

ch 0 3 Battle Imminent

Murim Recurve

Fantasy · Overlord_Venus

HeavenBreaker

2yr

Commented

tbh low-key glad they aren't caught up in the quest to put girl into power

[The Counter Measure Protocol is fully activated. Planet's location is too dangerous—reallocation of system and hosts necessary. All the actual missions have been canceled. Any penalties and bonuses have been negated. Gathering energy for super long-distance emergency teleport.]