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ch 242 Chapter XLVI: Moving Forward

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ch 199 Chapter III: The Dawnguard

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ch 191 Chapter LIV: Blasphemy

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the burning thing made me think of extremis

ch 20 20 - Jedi Saiyan

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ch 181 Chapter XLIV: The End Of Glory

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ch 180 Chapter XLIII: Labyrinthian (Part 2)

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ch 24 Where Are We?

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ch 176 Chapter XXXIX: Family Matters

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ch 19 Easy Wom-

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ch 172 Chapter XXXV: Firelord!

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ch 17 Mirror Copy

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ch 168 Chapter XXXI: Vacation

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ch 167 Chapter XXX: Sun And Shadow

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ch 165 Chapter XXVIII: Subtlety, what is that?

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ch 12 Yank vs London

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ch 163 Chapter XXVI: The Hunt

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ch 162 Chapter XXV: Ilinalta

the premise is nice enough, but the story doesn't help, in the first place the thing about most of the side characters acting like npcs was awful. Way too many jumps in story points it feels almost disjointed , plot holes (of course),and a dash of grammar errors(not that i can throw any stones but its an early warning), some phrases take away immersion making characters feel even more robotic