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Then stop reading/watching *eats more popcorn* in enjoying myself View More

_The_rider_: im bored ahaha

The Multiverse Conqueror · C157
2 weeks ago
GO PLUS ULTRA!!!!! View More
Heart of Purity · C22
2 weeks ago
First and feel the power stones View More
Heart of Purity · C23
2 weeks ago
Have your power stones :p View More
Heart of Purity · C20
3 weeks ago
Yo, So finally on pc, xD.
Your Story is really improving with each chapter, and im starting to really care about the characters in your story and connect with them on an emotional level, so congratz you got me now emotionally invested so GG, Other than that as stated before keep up the good work, its good that you didn't really describe and went into detail of the training section and you do those at a really good pace, as by now alot of readers have read about how a mc should train and ect but while mentioning that, if the said character haruto in this case/ you as an author have an idea or a eureka moment then please describe and tell us how you yourself think it works, if you add just the right amount of spice in this case Spice being "Realism" then it could really connect the reader more to said story, but ALL IN ALL "GO PLUS ULTRA!!!!". View More
Heart of Purity · C19
3 weeks ago
All I can say is keep it up your doing great, and it's looking to be a good novel, now remember when strong there is a novel called wish of a dragon it does it really well with an op MC, as.slice of.life moments are really great, it adds meaning to the story and feeling as well so keep up the good work 👌 View More
Heart of Purity · C18
3 weeks ago
Well contentuity basically means the world and universe around the Central story so because you did a time skip and a large one at that we don't know the details of the world around you and the difference and changes in the story of bnha like sure you have a female bakugo but what else is different the organizations what happened whole he was away as a reader I like the time skip but because of it I feel really disconnected due to not having much character development and world building for now just keep writing as you just need more chapters under your belt and as the plot progresses should be able to add all those things previously mentioned View More
Heart of Purity · C10
1 month ago
So, so far it okay... A little bit more punctuation would help, but it's easy to read and follow along none the less, story interesting but a bit weird and that is mostly due to the years that he was away, it feels a bit forced as he still feels like a child and he has absolutely no common sense so as a reader I feel a bit disconnected but it totally fits now glad you only did a brief overview of the time he was away as well but there has not been much character development so I can't get a sense and the pace of the story is everywhere so a little refinement of contentuity would be greatly appreciated but as of now good work and keep writing you are improving here and there so good job 👍👌 View More
Heart of Purity · C10
1 month ago
Jk If it's a girl Erza f it's a boy Ezra both have very good meanings View More
Blue Devil · C0
1 month ago
Dave, just Dave. View More
Blue Devil · C0
1 month ago

darkergrim: Ahaahah
Wow that’s kind of funny but at the same time sad

Chunibyo's Fanfic. (Currently in Highschool DxD.) · C64
1 month ago
Yes yes yes been wait for ages lol 😁 ty for continuing alot of writers just leave but you sir have class I top my hat to you View More
The New Issei · C30
2 months ago

vincentcloud: My God I swear to him right now of you drop this gem I will shove my fist so far up your ass you will be calling me daddy....

All in all it's a great novel you have personality and he's still not apathetic even being undead he has one of the best if not the best temperaments as he actually cares for others unlike WUXIA novels **** still pissed 😠 about them still having sex for one time then forgetting all about them, treat these characters as your gems give them developments and let them grow if they make a mistake then reprimanded them and take care of them.


Grammar wise this is great has a good flow and I don't need to look over a word and or replace a word in my head that makes more sense so keep up the good work and continue.


Story wise this is a nice take a refreshing feeling so to speak to many writers write grim and dark stories to often and keep saying that people are sick of happy endings, but no I as a reader like conclusions to my various books that I read and one that doesn't leave a sour salty taste in my mouth, did I say that out loud oh well. But I hope you keep writing.


Now realise wise is meh, and that's all I can say don't push yourself to hard then burn out you want to slowly fuel the flame of passion but control it so said flame doesn't go and blow all it's load, I mean fuel what is with me today.....


Most importantly ignore unhelpful comments that doesn't point out what they think is wrong with the story or have no bases whatsoever write and step on all the haters write that you had sex with their moms just to prove your dominance and get their fathers to call you daddy making you thier grampa and that they should sit on your lap WTF did I just write xD have fun.

Absolute Fantasy · C13
2 months ago

Peace12345: Any questions can be asked on this comment.

The New Issei · C0
2 months ago
My God I swear to him right now of you drop this gem I will shove my fist so far up your ass you will be calling me daddy....

All in all it's a great novel you have personality and he's still not apathetic even being undead he has one of the best if not the best temperaments as he actually cares for others unlike WUXIA novels **** still pissed 😠 about them still having sex for one time then forgetting all about them, treat these characters as your gems give them developments and let them grow if they make a mistake then reprimanded them and take care of them.


Grammar wise this is great has a good flow and I don't need to look over a word and or replace a word in my head that makes more sense so keep up the good work and continue.


Story wise this is a nice take a refreshing feeling so to speak to many writers write grim and dark stories to often and keep saying that people are sick of happy endings, but no I as a reader like conclusions to my various books that I read and one that doesn't leave a sour salty taste in my mouth, did I say that out loud oh well. But I hope you keep writing.


Now realise wise is meh, and that's all I can say don't push yourself to hard then burn out you want to slowly fuel the flame of passion but control it so said flame doesn't go and blow all it's load, I mean fuel what is with me today.....


Most importantly ignore unhelpful comments that doesn't point out what they think is wrong with the story or have no bases whatsoever write and step on all the haters write that you had sex with their moms just to prove your dominance and get their fathers to call you daddy making you thier grampa and that they should sit on your lap WTF did I just write xD have fun. View More
Absolute Fantasy · C13
2 months ago
Really need more View More
Disney-Traveler · C9
2 months ago

FlashyAli: I just remembered. If you guys wanted to know about the fan fictions that I was reading, please look them up on fanfiction.net, spacebattles or wherever else the authors might be posting. They are really good and I will be using ideas that were inspired from those stories.

Stargate Atlantis: Lantean Resurrection (hiatus) · C4
2 months ago
Right so first of all you are doing the great work I love your novel and the potential it holds there is so many cool things you can do, I must mention as well.

Do not rush things but at the same time it's science fiction so as long as it has a sliver of possiblity then go for it add only a little bit of reality or use what was in the show to add things.

Now the wraith is a cool threat I also like your upbeat take on the novel I never imagined a wraith sneezing and getting a perfect hit, the execution was great and the previous chapters is a good beginning.

Another thing, relationships and drama, you need this in this novel as much as I hate it its like spice to much and it's unplatable it need a little bit here and a little bit there, as a author or a writer not having slice of life moments or moments of reflection can kill a novel if it's just constant action.


The interaction of characters is really really important let's get to know them but because you are in this series early you can easily put your own spin on it like what you did with the Asgards because they basically died and did not have anything to do with the series other than peace keep or ask for help with the replicators.


First, reaction and action with the replicators when found, wraith is semi easy as it's just they are the bad guys defeat them but do keep the twist with Todd or something like that there can be good wraith. Now are there lines of code that he helped develop or did he help create the replicators and then see him as a father figure or something like that, would there be rebel replicators that like Dr weir in the series that uphold his morals and values, or are they going to react very badly.


Next is the wraith, what are you going to do with the queen child that they find help her or still kill her off, and is Michael going to exist because it would be a good twist, you could make it that the ioa did it or they ordered them to, or even the mc had a hand in it. And again the relationship with Todd


Another is the genai don't know how to spell it but oh well, they are also a good threat/friend a friendimy, I like them but it's meh if you want to involve them.

Then you have the ori love to see interaction with them as well and if he's going to help out I'll let you decide but you should, xD View More
Stargate Atlantis: Lantean Resurrection (hiatus) · C4
2 months ago
That's alot of damage if I'm correct about your profile picture xD also I'll type some inspiration for you later busy as well at the moment View More
Stargate Atlantis: Lantean Resurrection (hiatus) · C4
2 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Potion View More
The Goddess of Death · C1
2 months ago

FuturisticAshura: It's sad but you guys have to face the hard truth Ise is loyal gentlemen so
😢😢
Ise will..😭😭
Never😭😭😭😭😭😭
Fck her 😭😓😭😭😭😭😭😭😰😭😓😭😭😭
Good bye my friends
See you next time 🤧🤧

The Wish of the Dragon · C103
2 months ago

DoctorRD: I lobe this novel but the whole abandoning the symbolt is not something superman would do. In the comics and animated universe be has a whole zoo of dangerous creatures as pets because he couldn't abandon them

Super Man in marvel Universe · C25
3 months ago

Captain_Deadpool: i like this novel. but the fact that superman just abandoned it after saving his life was very disappointing. superman would never do that

Super Man in marvel Universe · C25
3 months ago

fearlessj2008: Well it was going great till the whole symbiote thing since superman would do that after it saved his life and talked about it being innocent. I will still read but hopefully that will get fixed sooner or later and hopefully of it doesn't the symbiote wont be like venom where it is stronger than original.

Super Man in marvel Universe · C25
3 months ago

WolfLord: Yep there's no way in hell Superman world have abandon that being but now there's a symbiote running around powers of kryptonian.Thanks for the chapter on a good story

Super Man in marvel Universe · C25
3 months ago

vincentcloud: Run it back that is not superman he wouldn't have let the symbiote go knowing that he saved his life and you saw his willpower literally moments before this is bs

Super Man in marvel Universe · C25
3 months ago

DragoonAdurna: I actually agree superman didn't even want to kill zod there is no way he would have abandoned a creature that would most likely die if it separated from him. It is your story though but I can tell you now a lot of people will stop reading if you change fundamental things about Clark Kent Superman I hope you change this part but if you don't I will still read pretty good story except this

Super Man in marvel Universe · C25
3 months ago
Run it back that is not superman he wouldn't have let the symbiote go knowing that he saved his life and you saw his willpower literally moments before this is bs View More
Super Man in marvel Universe · C25
3 months ago

Kilaske: Your Makarov is too against/hesitant mc. Makarov's son became a leader of dark guild, Gejeel badly beaten Levy and her group and hung them up, yet he still recruited him and Juvia, Laxus forcefully tried to take over the guild, but was forgiven, and the many other guild members used to have dark past like Erza, who was able to get over them because of the guild. Makarov should have been an understanding kind of character.

Chunibyo's Fanfic. (Currently in Highschool DxD.) · C64
3 months ago
Wow really 😮 so loner mc for rest of life never knowing true kindness and not evolving into a better person less broken and prone to remember all the pain not having any semblance of a happy life or good memories is that what you want sheesh go read a WUXIA where the mc just fucks and forgets about previous wives only to find another then just forgets about them then goes on a l
Killing spree just bcoz. View More

gokugoku: Please don't push the family idea of fairy tail on hope.
Thanks for the chapter

Chunibyo's Fanfic. (Currently in Highschool DxD.) · C64
3 months ago
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