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VermaWyrda: if i were to give a suggestion. then it would that you should focus on a small group of true wives so to speak, then some Lovers and eventually some Maids/Soldiers as a way to put his sexual conquests into position of how much char development is to be used, (and of course the revenge cases like olivia and scarlet can be put into a Floating bracket of Yet to be placed in position so thats up to you how much you you want to develop them. (or even more ranks for his harem all up to you however i would make a small group his main wives/queens alongside the sisters and the remainder his lovers/maids/soldiers/spys whatever (queens/sisters/lovers can gain his love unconditionaly but the remainder has to earn theyr happines.Lust Knight · C115
Rise of the Demon God · C257
Goddess Collector: Every Hole is a Goal · C358
FanHarem: this helps, thanksGoddess Collector: Every Hole is a Goal · C342
Kotario: I am speedGuild Wars · C157
FanHarem: I'll look her up. I don't recall herGoddess Collector: Every Hole is a Goal · C342
Inevitable Road To Divinity · C464
Goddess Collector: Every Hole is a Goal · C301
Goddess Collector: Every Hole is a Goal · C297
Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos · C1400
FanHarem: none at all. I think profession are overrated. Nik can he beast tamer thiGoddess Collector: Every Hole is a Goal · C291
FanHarem: Nik's stay will be on the tiny world and I am more than interested in the nightmare potGoddess Collector: Every Hole is a Goal · C291
Goddess Collector: Every Hole is a Goal · C291
Thoth0: I feel like it will be the Head of the Familia that will be able to be resurrected.Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos · C854
Grabbler: Fenrir is a vahnargandr.
Eva is a vahnpire.Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos · C752
Nier_Xue: Details.. I like all these details.. Thank you.. It helps me a lot... Keep up the good work.. I want inori!!!!! INORI!!!! Best!!!! MAKE MC VIST GUILTY CROWN, KICK SHU'S A$$!! HE DOESN'T DESERVE INORI!!! INORI..
Well i hope all these nonsene i sprouted above explaoins what kinda novel you are about to read..Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
TypeFantasyHeart: Dude.... You are writting an amazing world here... the quality of the writting is excellent and i dont believe i have found any mistake, the character development is marvelous dude... each individual character is seen as a person with alll their characteristics.
About the development of the story, while i find that its somewhat... well, really fast paced i would like it to slow down. Its like you want to climb a mountain but you dont go by foot but by helicopter. So far the MC is soul tier 2 and tier 9 is the highest known currently since the path is an artifact lvl 9, if mc goes to soul tier 3 to fast it will make things feel rushed.
Now speaking of danmachi, to be honest i would find it a waste should the MC leave, currently danmachi is cataloged as 1-4.... But a way exist to make it 1-5 and so on i believe. So it would be awesome if the world can level up too, and there exist the posiblity of even mixing up worlds with portals so as to make that MC could come and go between worlds. Even the MC could get a portal skill to come back to Hephaestus and the others. IT would be awesome if you can make it with the help of MC that people can go beyond lvl 7, which is ottar from the freya family and reach lvl 8 or higher. I say it again, it would be a huge waste and terrible mistake in my opinion to leave behind danmachi should the mc go to another world.
This is beacause danmachi universe didnt existed before the mc went inside, the path i believe created that world, gods and all. So its fine to think that the path has the ability to make universes that are weaker than it, who says you cant make other universes and mix them up? Even more you can put it that inside the laberith is a portal to another world too, and to make things easier it was found a portal in floor 60 for example that can send you back to the surface or from the surface to floor 60 if you have reached it.Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
ThomasDarkrose: Writing Quality: 5/5 - While there are occasional typos, ****y tiny grammatical errors or punctuation errors, they do not detract from the story in any way. The writing is excellent and just draws you in.
Stability of Updates: 5/5 - The author pumps out chapters like a madman all in order to feed the addicted souls he has created. 'Nuff said.
Story Development: 5/5 - The story starts with a nieve and broken main character, Vahn, and through interactions with the world and the characters in it, he grows. Vahn still has a lot of growing to do and I, personally, look forward to seeing the man that Vahn will grow into.
Character Design: 4/5 - I would love to give the author 5/5 stars just for the design of Vahn, but I prefer to be honest and forthright. Because this is a fan-fiction many of the main characters were already designed by the original author of DanMachi. That said, Einlion takes those pre-existing characters and completely makes them his own without violating the source material. While reading this story you will be hard pressed to find any reason to complain about the use of the pre-existing characters, their reactions, or their believability.
World Background: 4/5 - Again, I would love to make this 5/5 stars, but the story takes place in a pre-existing world. Just like the characters though, the world is not violated or discarded it is embraced and honored.
Fan-fictions are a tough genre to write in, you have to take a world and characters that already exist, and are loved, then make them your own while writing your own story. Einlion does this exceptionally well and is crafting an amazing story that follows a unique and amazing character. The only thing I could possibly complain about is that I found this novel now instead of a year from now, I can't binge read it nearly enough.
On a final note, if you are a fan of DanMachi, or anime in general, and looking for a story with a unique and entertaining main character than I strongly recommend reading this story.Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
Lesbian_Loli: With all my regards..
Fuck you~Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos · C722
YinBlak: and think that it came to an end. I just have to express my deep hatred to the translators who took all their time to translate the last 10 chapters. If you are reading this, I hope you have diarrhea in the middle of a dinner with your in-laws.
**: I would love some more chapters telling what happened to the children and wives.Castle of Black Iron · C2015
Castle of Black Iron · C2010
N1GG3R: I saw on discord that you mentioned that chapters are already written. However seriously no matter how I look at this, maya getting plucked by that douche can only serve to fullfill your vanity and in any other point of view this is clean shot in the knee. I highly suggest to modify the chapters, because it's a rally great story for r18, even thought a little slow paced, and it's a shame looking at this skydiving into mud. Even thought you are the author and the one who decides how the story goes, you should still take a viewer's suggestions into account, because TWOS is rally gonna lose a lot of readers if jacob gets cucked (and yeah, I know that she still is not the partner officially).The Sex Beast System (The World Of Systems) · C74
The Sex Beast System (The World Of Systems) · C74
FanHarem: .... that's actually a nice idea....Goddess Collector: Every Hole is a Goal · C167
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