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I m doing this bcs is literally not coherent, yeah that's all. They story line make us reader confused alot. - Times skip = 5 years later but his skill and level still low after what we see at first times he level up is feel like a lie. - His personality is kinda vague. - The story focus make us kinda confused.

cough i write it wrong is not and in bad but "BED" HAHA

This story is actually good, but this is not my cup of tea. After more then 300 chapter the story feeling more bland because the MC losing about his own sense as person. And the conflict its self is full filler of battle. I know is like cool but if you read it more then 300 chapter the scene itself become like generic. and everytimes he play the game or in real world MC life is full damsel in distress. and sometimes the purpose of the girl itself is for explaining something. However i feel the encounter itself is too much, i mean can you make it sometime the narator is not gurl? and the eend gonna admire the mc later play on bad?

i feel the same, he losing himself.

I thought so too, the story feel like unrealistic. And the MC character is like forced. When I read from the start I thought oh look like he is kinda person that not gonna use violence so much. But will use his head and win his member loyalty but... yeah is bad.

I even force my self to read the story until 300++ chapter... and i regret it alot. Lol The story feel so unreasonable and unrealistic. And the author just add for abnormalities that happen "Thanks for great Nano Machine" kinda absurd. Even there no real explanation how the Nano work.

This the book that i don't recommended you. 1. The phase is too fast 2. The story feel not coherent, that because the abrupt of changing between story feel like unreasonable. 3. The MC character is too vague, between right and wrong he like actually good person but his choice of act is too violence, so his act is like being coded by the author and is seem unatural. everything happen so far is like for the plot. So the MC growth is just his power but not with his emotion. 4. The story never tell u why the MC can stay still even not eating at all in long time. Because there a word to say that he still eat food because of hungry. However when there he got into seclusion or was learn something that need period of time he don't eat or even drink. So you can day the world science is kinda vague. 5. He always rely on nano machine but all scientific way never have explained pretty well. Like The nano can use heal and anesthesia. Don't fool us with nano machine can stimulate the body cell for heal. so if nano machine stimulate the body do you care tell me why he don't hungry bcs lost energy when he was healing?So is too vague. If he tell me get energy from qi through the air for heal, i can still say oh that happen. But he can replenish his energy by the air pretty much at 200++ chapter. So he not immortal ...aight? 6. The romance story is like forced. I hope they don't even write this one. Is like suddenly Naruto change heart and married Hinata. You know why? Because there no event a hint in nnaruto storyline since the start so i know well is get attached later. That happen in this story too.