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hmmmm. . its better if he command him to kill himself. . sighh

great story but all i read is mc status. . can author just write what skill, level, mc stat etc that change in a simple way rather than write all of them then repeat it again n again. . just write mc full status at the end of the chapter ulif u want to satisfy yourself to write mc full status. .

wow. . mc x sasuke, clap3

15 days without update. . please dont drop this author san. .

author please decide what mc be called in this story. . hatake yeruashi or erase? please slect one of them instead of using both. .i got irritated reading this. .n 1 more, please fix grammar. . there are too many typo or missing letter. .

yeah that was some cool badass moment for mc. . but i think he should not do like that. . bcoz ur is already saved, n the kingdom destroyed is his fault. . furthermore he is leading happy life with his harem. . mc is so petty. . dont he realize at tht time gray is just a kid. . he is also a person who are transmigrated n mc also is a lawyer. .so he should have a better brain to make decision. . i can accept that he want to forgot his past, but. . .sighh. . whatever. .

sigh. . ripping clothes? duh. . everytime they do hot activity they rip clothes? or rather mc ripped her clothe. . i cannot imagine how many clothe are ripped already. .

yeah,u are right author. . your ninja romantic harem comedy is totally shit. .

thats y weak woman is a burden at the same time she will make u in paradise. .

keep it up author

one of the most hated trait of mc, arriving late in action. .

well, i dont care for your mistake about foreshadowing but i dont agree your statement about human habit to repeat mistake. . we learn from our mistake, thats y we get more mature. . but if u repeat it, the it is a waste for god to give u a brain. .

habit to repeat mistake? .then that was stupid,. if u repeating mistake becme habit then just bash your head and feed your brain to the dog. .

thank u author. . u are so handsome. . i apologize for my word. . i thought kushina and minato die same in canon story. . i dont care about the sin or whatever. . i just dont want them to die, they are so pitiful. .their son had just born, and they die. . im sad when i watch in anime naruto true parent. .

damn u author. . in the end this is the same as the canon. . fak u

damn u author. .. u spoil this story. . i thought he will save minato and kushina. . damn u

hmmmm. . mc is so stupid that i have an urge to beat him. . y dont use the 'cheat' skill in naruto world jutsu. . **** him . . please realize the ultimate cheat clone technique. .

one fact author write for medical is true in real world. . hahahaha. . every doctor i meet, i dont even understand what they write on the paper. . but im confuse how the worker in farmacy can understand the calighrapy writing of doctor. . hahahahahaaha. . maybe they also write like doctor. . so every medical student have their own calighrapy. . hahaha

damn u author. . u keep nerfing mc then buff him a bit but keep nerfing him for longer time. .

i thought mc is a bit like sasuke. . in the end he is just a boy who is controlled by a girl. . i mean ino in this story is annoying same as sakura in the anime. . she keep tobi here, tobi there. . i dont mean to critic author, but i as a man who annoyed when woman soo clingy to me dont like this girl (ino) in this story. . i dont like when mc had no voice over his opinion. . btw, this is a good story